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Some wedding shots...

Postby hyperhiryu on Mon Sep 03, 2007 10:18 am

Went along to a friends wedding to suppliment the photographer. I'd like to get some feedback with these 2 images:

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I'm thinking of cropping the grandmother out as her head is quite large and distracting ( :P ). What do you think?

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Not sure about the focus with this shot. Cake, knife, or hands? (I tried getting the tip of the knife, but it seems I got the flowers on the right)
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Postby Bindii on Mon Sep 03, 2007 12:08 pm

Lol.. I am sure that Grandma wil be chuffed to know that she has such a large and distracting head... :wink:

Both of these images are quite good though... I like the idea and the cake shot.. the dof is almost spot on there... well done...:)
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Postby SteveB on Mon Sep 03, 2007 3:41 pm

I wouldn't chop her out as she was a part of the day, it is a shame she is not smiling though. Maybe she hated her new relo!!
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Postby hyperhiryu on Mon Sep 03, 2007 5:15 pm

Thanks for the comments guys, I guess I'lll keep granny in :lol:
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