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Postby Chaase on Sun Aug 26, 2007 11:53 pm

Newbie post (Please be kind) I was playing with my new Tokina 12-24 lens I purchased last week.

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I am disapointed with the shadow on the right arm but it's hard to pose a 2 1/2 year old :)
Thanks
Bruce

<Dubba edit> Fixed the problem, This forum does not like "&" in the file name.
Removed it and now all good.
Thanks
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Postby shakey on Mon Aug 27, 2007 12:29 am

Either your photo site doesn't allow you to link images to other sites or your photo is too large and has been bumped by some software filters on this site.

I tried to post your photo but it wouldn't display in preview mode. Make sure your photo is less than 200 KB in size to get through any DSLRusers filters (I don't know whether they exist or not... :lol: ). If it still can't be displayed then I suspect your hosting site has banned off site links (or you may have done it yourself and forgotten about it)

Nice photo by the way...worth showing on here

http://www.equalaccess.com.au/photos/C&M800.jpg
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Postby big pix on Mon Aug 27, 2007 12:38 am

Link was fixed so the image was removed
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Cheers ....bp....
Difference between a good street photographer and a great street photographer....
Removing objects that do not belong...
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.....Please DO NOT edit my image.....
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Postby shakey on Mon Aug 27, 2007 12:51 am

Well...I'll be dammed...I thought that -L, -M stuff only applied to Smugmug.

Onya Bernie

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Postby big pix on Mon Aug 27, 2007 12:58 am

shakey wrote:Well...I'll be dammed...I thought that -L, -M stuff only applied to Smugmug.

Onya Bernie

:)


it is the only thing I see that is different to what I do..... I could be wrong, but a mod will be along soon...... Stubbys gone off to get a tattoo :wink:
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Postby shakey on Mon Aug 27, 2007 1:06 am

The photo in your post now seems to be hosted on smugmug...all too complicated for me...

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Postby Chaase on Mon Aug 27, 2007 8:18 am

Fixed the problem, This forum does not like "&" in the file name.
Removed it an now all good.
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Postby Wocka on Mon Aug 27, 2007 9:51 am

I love the colours and contrast.
I didn't actually notice the shadow until you pointed it out.

You must be happy with the lens.

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Postby Chaase on Mon Aug 27, 2007 5:06 pm

Wocka wrote:You must be happy with the lens.


I am actually especially when you compare the price to the Canon equivalent for $580 I am very happy with the quality.

Bruce
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Postby devilla101 on Mon Aug 27, 2007 7:31 pm

Lovely image. The colors and contrast are great. Maybe could do with a tighter crop eliminating the mom from the back
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Postby sunnylass on Mon Aug 27, 2007 8:07 pm

What a little cutie she is! The pic looks nice and sharp, you must be happy with the lens :)
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Postby Greg B on Mon Aug 27, 2007 10:15 pm

Personally I like the composition as it is, and your little girl is very sharp, great colour, really nice shot.
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