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Postby camrak on Fri Jun 01, 2007 9:40 pm

After Tasmania ... just extra two from our pacific border :) Any comments welcome!

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1. Stairs to light ...

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2. Big and peaceful ...
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Postby Pehpsi on Mon Jun 04, 2007 1:28 am

Beautiful shots mate, making good use of good light. Clarity in #1 and the warm colours in #2 are great..
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Postby stubbsy on Mon Jun 04, 2007 9:31 am

#1 is nicely composed but is just a little over polarised at the top and so too dark for my tastes. #2 is spot on - great composition and wonderful light.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Jun 04, 2007 12:51 pm

I'd agree with Peter the first looks too dark and blue up top and it isnt consistant. The 2nd, it just magical, the light the waves and the clouds, just a really nice landscape.
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Postby camrak on Mon Jun 04, 2007 11:29 pm

Yes - I agree about PLC issue on photo 1#- this is a common problem with polarizer filter on the wide lenses. Previously I tried to do this photo without PLC but picture was totally flat and not interesting.

Second one .... magically light /magically place = magically picture
I just recorded what nature has created. :)
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Postby Yi-P on Tue Jun 05, 2007 12:25 am

#2 is simply great shot :D
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Postby camrak on Tue Jun 05, 2007 6:39 pm

Nice to read this Yi-P ;) Thanks again for all comments :)
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Postby Bindii on Fri Jun 08, 2007 1:47 pm

They are both great shots...but the second one is just wow! I hope that you had it printed and framed...:)
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