Superbikes by Raskill

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Superbikes by Raskill

Postby Raskill on Sat Nov 25, 2006 12:25 pm

Ahoy folks,

Would have liked to have had these posted sooner, but it appears that Goulburn, or maybe just the POlice academy, has CRAP internet access.

Anywhoo, these are a few of my images. This was the first time shooting motorbikes. They seem easier than V8 supercars I must say.

The day had good weather and good company, with Paul and Jeff both there. Hows the camera Jeff? And Paul, hows that lens going? :wink:

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Thanks for looking folks!
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Postby daniel_r on Sat Nov 25, 2006 12:32 pm

Nice work!

#1 is probably the pick of the 3 here. Focus is dead on and it's tack sharp. The second bike in the background adds to the action.
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Postby gstark on Sat Nov 25, 2006 12:38 pm

I too like #1, with the OOF rider in the background only helping to enhance the strength of this image.

#2 is a pearler too, with the rider's head turned directly - almost defiantly, even - towards the camera, as if to ask "who the hell you are, taking this photo?" while he is busy trying to complete the race.

Great work.
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Postby Jeff on Sat Nov 25, 2006 7:18 pm

Great work Alan,hope Goulburn was not to troublesome. The camera still has an intermitted fault ,maybe I should get a new body.

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Postby Oscar on Sun Nov 26, 2006 7:31 am

Great work Raskill. I am also a fan of the first shot - love the OOF rider in the background.

When I saw the second shot my first thoughts were "what's that rider up to? - doesn't seem to need to see where he's going".

Well done. Cheers, Mick :) :) :)
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Postby Raskill on Sun Nov 26, 2006 11:39 am

Thanks folks. I like number 2 the best. All three images are really sharp, but I reduced them for posting, and they all seem a bit softer than I would have liked.

PPing was cropping, saturation and contrast. I like my motorsport images to be a bit contrasty, gives them a nice 'magazine' feel.

I'm going to have to try and get back to EC for another motorbike round and improve. I'd say about 60-70% of my shots were keepers, which I'm very happy about. Need to get it up over 90% to be content though.

Jeff, your right, you need a new camera. Maybe a D2x? Or maybe 2 of them? :P
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