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Postby Pa on Sat Nov 11, 2006 7:18 am

just a sunset taken off the side landing last evening.
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Postby BBJ on Sat Nov 11, 2006 7:33 am

Very nice Pa, pitty about the trees but i have that problem here as well trees lights from the hyway and a bloody side of the montain.
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Postby Ladybird on Sat Nov 11, 2006 8:41 am

Awesome colours Pa. Not only the orange of the sky but the deep blue/grey of the clouds. I do find the tree a bit distracting but at the same time, I think if it wasn't there, the shot may be missing something.

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Postby Pa on Sat Nov 11, 2006 3:23 pm

thanks ,bbj and ladybird,house to the left and power posts and houses
to the right.i'm lucky i have that gap.
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Postby Killakoala on Sat Nov 11, 2006 6:35 pm

Ooooh, nice. :)
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Postby surenj on Sat Nov 11, 2006 6:39 pm

Love those colours!
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Postby zeddy on Sat Nov 11, 2006 10:24 pm

love the colours,looks awesome :D
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Postby jammy2 on Sat Nov 11, 2006 10:52 pm

wow strong saturated colours from the sunset and moody silhouette from the trees
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Postby Underload on Sat Nov 11, 2006 11:05 pm

Fantastic colours mate - it's a far cry from what I usually see at sunset!
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Postby Pa on Sun Nov 12, 2006 3:01 am

thanks for the comments steve,surenj,zeddy,jammy2, and underload,it's always nice to record a pretty sunset or sunrise
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Postby kamran on Sun Nov 12, 2006 7:58 pm

Lovely saturated colors! Stunning.
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Postby Pa on Mon Nov 13, 2006 8:16 am

thanks for the comments kamran.
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Postby Yi-P on Mon Nov 13, 2006 8:43 am

Stunning it is...

I'd say it will be better if the tree doesnt cover that much of a large portion of the frame, the sky is more interesting there :P
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Postby Oscar on Mon Nov 13, 2006 10:03 am

Pa, I like the tree in the piccie but IMHO it dominates the shot too much.
How about trying a portrait crop leaving just a little of the tree in and all of the right side of the shot.
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Postby Pa on Mon Nov 13, 2006 10:45 am

thanks yip and mick,cropped as suggested.
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Postby zafra52 on Mon Nov 13, 2006 6:45 pm

I prefer the first one. I believe it is a better composition since the silhouettes of the trees in the foreground add drama to the composition and contrasts with the colours of the sky and clouds.
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Postby Pa on Mon Nov 13, 2006 8:48 pm

thanks zafra52 for the comments. i tend to agree with you.
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Postby ozimax on Mon Nov 13, 2006 8:54 pm

Wonderful, spectacular colour here Pa, and all from Taree! I think the trees, bushes etc add to this image.
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Postby rflower on Mon Nov 13, 2006 9:02 pm

I think the 1st in Landscape is better too. You see more of the majesty of the colour.

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