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Postby macka on Wed Oct 04, 2006 12:09 pm

Hard to get an interesting shot of this building. Would like to hear your thoughts on these two.

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Postby Glen on Wed Oct 04, 2006 12:13 pm

Kris, barr the slight reflections (maybe a cpl?) the second works so well for me. The lack of detail in the shadows of the first draws attention to the OH, but also leaves me with the impression not all of the frame has been used.
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Postby Laurie on Wed Oct 04, 2006 12:14 pm

i really like number 2.
any PP?? btw being a member of the Barry Hall Hall, have you recovered from the loss :(
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Postby macka on Wed Oct 04, 2006 12:26 pm

Glen, thanks. Don't think I mind the reflections... On #1, I guess I lost of lot of detail in my B&W conversion, but I was going for high contrast.

Laurie, just barely. :cry: Bring on '07. 8)

Here is the original of #2. I can't take credit for the PP, Pat fixed the aspect, but it's what I had in mind when I took the shot.

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Postby gstark on Wed Oct 04, 2006 12:26 pm

#2.

That is a photo!
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Postby MHD on Wed Oct 04, 2006 12:30 pm

Two original photos of an oft-shot scene...
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Postby wendellt on Wed Oct 04, 2006 12:31 pm

the firs one is very surreal and appealing

the 2nd one composition is very thoughtful

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Postby ABG on Wed Oct 04, 2006 12:37 pm

I like the PP you've done on the first, but the compostion doesn't quite work for me. The second is great. For some reason, it looks like a photo taken in the 70's to me, but can't put my finger on why...
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Postby stubbsy on Wed Oct 04, 2006 12:38 pm

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As already mentioned I find #1 a touch too dark, but #2 is a great concept well executed. Oddly my only niggle with #2 (which I think is a great image) is that is now SO regular it almost looks like the dividing cross of the window frames was imposed in PP over a single reflection.
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Postby macka on Wed Oct 04, 2006 1:35 pm

Thanks for the replies.



ABG wrote: For some reason, it looks like a photo taken in the 70's to me, but can't put my finger on why...


Andrew, maybe it's that washed-out sort of look you get from a reflection.

stubbsy wrote:my only niggle with #2 (which I think is a great image) is that is now SO regular it almost looks like the dividing cross of the window frames was imposed in PP over a single reflection.


I see what you're saying, but I think it's stronger like this than it was originally. Not sure how I'd fix that or if it even could be fixed...



Originally the first had more on the RHS, perhaps I should revisit the crop. And the conversion, so as to try and save some detail on the left.

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Postby Grev on Wed Oct 04, 2006 1:51 pm

For the first one, I reckon the building on the left should be pped to get more detail.
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Postby CraigVTR on Wed Oct 04, 2006 2:05 pm

Love #2 great as it is.
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Postby Manta on Wed Oct 04, 2006 2:12 pm

Great images Kris - congratulations!

I can't really choose a favourite.
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Postby sirhc55 on Wed Oct 04, 2006 2:35 pm

#1 is a ripper - the darkness of the building draws the eye to the SOH and the wonderful sky. IMHO this is the better ”photograph”. The number of conflicting images in the reflection makes this a jumble and the eye cannot focus on any detail - maybe a CPL would have helped enormously in this case.
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Postby Matt. K on Wed Oct 04, 2006 7:15 pm

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I like the first shot best. Very dramatic and a completly different view of the OH. You done good.
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Postby MattyO on Wed Oct 04, 2006 7:50 pm

i really like that first photo, however, i am not sure whether the square crop suits.

the second shot is very creative, nice work.
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Postby Oscar on Wed Oct 04, 2006 8:05 pm

Macka, great shots.
Think a different crop may work better in the first one - maybe you could play around a bit more and see what you like (maybe you'll stick with this one anyway).
Love the second shot as you posted it. Cheers, Mick :) :) :)
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Postby macka on Thu Oct 05, 2006 8:41 am

Thanks everyone for the comments, really appreciate it.

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Postby owen on Tue Oct 17, 2006 8:46 pm

I really like number 1 too Macka. I think it's a great and different shot of a very photographed icon.
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Postby macka on Tue Oct 17, 2006 9:02 pm

owen wrote:I really like number 1 too Macka. I think it's a great and different shot of a very photographed icon.


Thanks, Owen. As it turns out, I got 15th place in a recent DP Challenge "high contrast" for this shot - my best yet!

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Postby owen on Tue Oct 17, 2006 9:03 pm

Well done :) I'm never organised enough to enter those comps hehe. Keep up the good work!
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