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85mm, f/1.4, 1/100, flash off

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Workshop Pt-1 B&WsPosting some up before becoming a cliche here..
![]() 85mm, f/1.4, 1/100, flash off ![]() 85mm, f/1.4, 1/100, flash off ![]() 50mm, f/11, 1/160, flash
I especially like the angle and b&w treatment in the first - really nice
![]() The second captures a thoughtful moment, and again works well in b&w. To me, the third is the least strong of these three - while still a nice picture, it doesn't seem as compelling as the other two. *** When getting there is half the fun! ***
#3 is good and #2 has a nice glow to it. Good work.
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You guys did really well yesterday! Yi-p I like #2 the best out of these images. Great work!
Geoff
Special Moments Photography Nikon D700, 50mm 1.4, 85mm 1.4, 70-200 2.8VR, SB800 & some simple studio stuff.
Good work Yi-P, The light in the 2nd shot is really interesting - looks very natural. Like the 3rd shot next. The angle of the 1st doesn't seem right - I tried a couple on a similar angle and they don't look right to me either IMHO. Cheers, Mick
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No 2 and 3 are good. Great facial expression in No.2, although I feel it could do with a bit more contrast.
Alex
Yi-P, as well as these great posts I went to your gallery and have to point at number 70 in your gallery of Jacinta - fantastic!
http://yiph.zenfolio.com/p214769839?photo=720129798 I'd also go for #73 http://yiph.zenfolio.com/p214769839?photo=702846438 D3 | 18-200VR | 50:1.4 | 28:2.8 | 35-70 2.8 | 12-24 f4
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73 is really great.
At first glance, it's all wrong, with the hand and bow partially obscuring the face. Then you see the Jacinta's eye, between the shaft and the hair. Magic! g.
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Yi-P
The chair should have been behind the model. It blocks the veiwers eye and the eye has to skirt around it. Otherwise not bad. Gary picked number 70 and I have to agree. A beautiful shot! Regards
Matt. K
I must agree with this 'eye-skirting' issue from the chair. But then I think Gary or Dee put the chair this way so that she can have something to lean on and not to be sitting down on a dead-locked position facing the camera. I think, for the non-professional models, this way helps them to relax a bit in posing. Being the fact that she is surrounded by about 8 ambitious photographers and getting powerful flashes every 1.5 or 2 seconds. It must be hard and stressful to be on the other side of the lens I assume.
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