Glass bricks and wood thingy

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Glass bricks and wood thingy

Postby Matt. K on Mon Aug 28, 2006 11:45 pm

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Postby MCWB on Tue Aug 29, 2006 12:21 am

#2 is a corker Matt, great stuff! #1 is also great, and I suspect most people will love it, but maybe there needs to be less distortion in order to take advantage of the symmetry?
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Postby sirhc55 on Tue Aug 29, 2006 12:25 am

Matt - after lengthy discussions on the virtue of brick walls as photographic items of interest I feel that the substitution of glass does not hide the fact that it is a brick wall :lol:

The second shot is fascinating - where is this graphic located :?:
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Postby asaroha on Tue Aug 29, 2006 2:02 am

#2 is great. The colour is almost animation-like. I would also be interested on where this is located.
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Postby stubbsy on Tue Aug 29, 2006 10:13 am

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I like both of these and think they are quite strong and different takes on the subject matter. The second shot in particular makes fantastic use of colour. I've taken a few shots of that piece of Luna Park (answer for you Chris :wink: ), but never been happy with what I got. Now I've seen your take I've a lot to aim for next time.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Aug 29, 2006 3:37 pm

Love the second one Matt, I don't always get all of your shots, but this one definitely got me :)
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Postby Matt. K on Tue Aug 29, 2006 6:40 pm

Very perceptive Peter!...Luna Park! :D :D
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Postby pippin88 on Tue Aug 29, 2006 7:18 pm

First one would be excellent if it didn't have those black shelves (I think that's what they are) on it.
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Postby christiand on Tue Aug 29, 2006 8:49 pm

Hi Matt,

great shots, especially No 2 :D
Tell us a bit about the "pinball machines" in the left part of No 2
They are trompe d'oeil ?

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Postby Matt. K on Tue Aug 29, 2006 9:29 pm

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It is all trompe d'oeil except for the red bench in the foreground. Therein is its charm...and confusion.
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