low key portraits. sulphur crested cockatoos

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low key portraits. sulphur crested cockatoos

Postby avkomp on Wed Aug 02, 2006 10:41 pm

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been working on low key stuff lately. the first one is another attempt at low key portraits of our native birds.

does the darker whites bother you or do you prefer white to be white.?
d2x 80-400 vr @ 400
400iso f8. sb800 @ -2ev
first 1/125
second 1/60
both handheld

edit: whites popped a bit as per suggestions

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Postby Finch on Wed Aug 02, 2006 10:43 pm

Steve,

Both shots are well composed and sharp but lacking ever so slightly in brightness (on my screen).

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Postby sirhc55 on Wed Aug 02, 2006 10:45 pm

Steve - this is a difficult one to answer. White, as you know, has no definition so you have to rely very much on the slight shading caused by feathers. I would say that somewhere between the first shot and the second would be near to the ideal.
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Postby avkomp on Wed Aug 02, 2006 10:49 pm

the issue I caused myself was to go for a black background.

normally I may well have used more fill.
I personally think the whites need a little extra, nonetheless I quite like the first.

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Postby optogamut on Wed Aug 02, 2006 11:45 pm

I don't think chewing on treated pine is supposed to be very good for you. :(
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Postby avkomp on Thu Aug 03, 2006 12:15 am

doesnt seem to be whacking these guys, in fact I think it causes more of em.

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Postby moggy on Thu Aug 03, 2006 12:21 am

Nice shots Steve, when the ones on my clothes line get bored they pass the time pulling the clothes pegs off the washing. Bastards! :lol:

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Postby avkomp on Thu Aug 03, 2006 12:22 am

so long as they dont cr*p on the washing.
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Postby Oneputt on Thu Aug 03, 2006 8:08 am

I am with Chris on the white issue, and whilst I like the second the best, somewhere between the two would probably be about right.
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Postby Oscar on Thu Aug 03, 2006 8:32 am

Steve, I think the first one is a cracker of a shot. The white in the second appears to have a bluish hint which dulls it somewhat - however viewed by itself the whites do not seem so bad and if you had posted this alone then others wouldn't have been squawking over it. :) :)
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Postby admajic on Thu Aug 03, 2006 10:01 am

I like the first one. The feather details is excellent. 2nd one makes me wonna smack the bugger they are so distructive rippin at everything they can :P
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