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DNA staircase

Postby Geoff on Wed Aug 02, 2006 1:40 am

On the way back to our car in Darlinghurst tonight we walked past the Victor Chang Cardiac Research Institute, which has this massive staircase (I think) replicating the DNA structure. I shot it:

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Postby PiroStitch on Wed Aug 02, 2006 1:47 am

Nicely done Geoff but the verticals aren't quite straight :P
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Postby Geoff on Wed Aug 02, 2006 1:49 am

Yep I know :)
I took this on a hill :lol: :lol: :lol:

Was wondering if it was *that* obvious, there's my answer. :D
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Postby Glen on Wed Aug 02, 2006 1:58 am

Geoff, well spotted. The verticals do show :wink: but taken with a tripod could go on the wall. Love the B&W
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Postby Geoff on Wed Aug 02, 2006 2:09 am

Here's a fixed version - any better? Not quite there is it? How do u fix this? I have just done this in PS rotate canvas/arbitrary:

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Postby Glen on Wed Aug 02, 2006 2:11 am

The vertical on the left catches your attention, maybe time for a perspective correction lens to go on your D200 or similar software? :D
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Postby Geoff on Wed Aug 02, 2006 2:13 am

Glen wrote:The vertical on the left catches your attention, maybe time for a perspective correction lens to go on your D200 or similar software? :D
:lol: :lol: :lol:
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Postby Glen on Wed Aug 02, 2006 2:24 am

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Postby PiroStitch on Wed Aug 02, 2006 2:50 am

now that's money well spent :P

I just do a rotate and crop usually in RSP
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Postby stubbsy on Wed Aug 02, 2006 10:01 am

Geoff this is very easy to fix using Edit/Transformation/Perspective in PSCS
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Postby Geoff on Wed Aug 02, 2006 10:05 am

stubbsy wrote:Geoff this is very easy to fix using Edit/Transformation/Perspective in PSCS


Thanx Peter :up:
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Postby rokkstar on Wed Aug 02, 2006 10:37 am

Cor, what a great looking staircase.
Nice shot Geoff. The black and white accentuates the shapes.

It reminds me of the staircase built by Joesph the carpenter in that church (brazil perhaps, the exact location escapes me). Built entirely out of wood, spirals without any visible means of support.

Nice shot Geoff, might go and visit that structure myself.
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Postby Geoff on Wed Aug 02, 2006 10:42 am

Thanks Matt,
This was taken through glass and I was surprised that it came out as well as it did. I desperately wanted to get in and take some more shots earlier in the day but the big security dude kinda scared me off somewhat, I might return there one day. Heck I work on the campus, should be fine eh!? :)
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Postby PiroStitch on Wed Aug 02, 2006 11:19 am

Geoff, since you work there bring a tripod :) Dont' let the security guy scare you off or affect your work ;)

I can see that the shot has lots of potential but might just need a bit more timing in the execution, then again it has that nice grit to the shot which may not be recreated if you spent more time...
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Postby moggy on Wed Aug 02, 2006 11:34 am

Nice shot Geoff, the B&W treatment looks good. No wonder it's at the Victor Chang Institute, if I tried to climb that they would have to be standing by with the defibrillator! :lol:

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Postby MCWB on Wed Aug 02, 2006 1:44 pm

Could be an alpha helix from a protein structure too Geoff, either that or an A- or B-DNA double helix.
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Postby Geoff on Wed Aug 02, 2006 2:20 pm

Now you're just showing off, all I wanted to do was share a photo :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Postby wally on Wed Aug 02, 2006 4:39 pm

geoff what does the DNA stand for?
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Postby Geoff on Wed Aug 02, 2006 4:41 pm

Wally - it stands for Deoxyribonucleic acid which is the genetic structure of which we are all made up of. For more info talk to Trent :D He's the master at this stuff.
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Postby Glen on Wed Aug 02, 2006 5:16 pm

MCWB wrote:Could be an alpha helix from a protein structure too Geoff, either that or an A- or B-DNA double helix.



Trent I am impressed (you too Geoff), you guys could have told me that is the inside of my penis and I would have believed you. :D
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Postby Geoff on Wed Aug 02, 2006 5:57 pm

Glen wrote:
MCWB wrote:Could be an alpha helix from a protein structure too Geoff, either that or an A- or B-DNA double helix.



you guys could have told me that is the inside of my penis and I would have believed you. :D


Now that'd be painful I would imagine :D
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Postby MCWB on Wed Aug 02, 2006 7:09 pm

Glen wrote:you guys could have told me that is the inside of my penis and I would have believed you. :D

Have you ever wondered why they call it "having a screw"? :lol:
wally wrote:geoff what does the DNA stand for?

National Dyslexic Association. :)
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Postby Marty on Wed Aug 02, 2006 8:52 pm

Great shot Geoff,
now you are an Urban photographer.....
Well spotted and a good shot.
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Postby gstark on Wed Aug 02, 2006 8:58 pm

Glen wrote:
MCWB wrote:Could be an alpha helix from a protein structure too Geoff, either that or an A- or B-DNA double helix.



Trent I am impressed (you too Geoff), you guys could have told me that is the inside of my penis and I would have believed you. :D


And we would have had some serious concerns about Geoff's photographic tastes.
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