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Postby PiroStitch on Wed Aug 02, 2006 3:02 am

Here's another with a bit more work done to it.

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Postby Heath Bennett on Wed Aug 02, 2006 8:33 am

yeah this definately works. Well done Wayne[/url]
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Postby gstark on Wed Aug 02, 2006 9:06 am

Wayne.

Very nice. Well done.
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Postby PiroStitch on Wed Aug 02, 2006 11:36 am

Thanks guys. I would have a loved a shot of her with her eyes open but didn't want to annoy the genius at work (not me...the hairstylist :wink: )
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Postby wendellt on Wed Aug 02, 2006 12:04 pm

lovely colour and moment
i must say i mised her
don't worry about bothering the hairstylist
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i doubt the model opening her eyes and slightly moving her face towards you woudl have bothered the hair preparation process
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Postby PiroStitch on Wed Aug 02, 2006 12:20 pm

thanks Wendell.

She was the very last model to be ready as she was the one with the huge willow tree hair.
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Postby byrt_001 on Wed Aug 02, 2006 12:29 pm

excellent makeup. composition i would like her to see her more to the right size.

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Postby sirhc55 on Wed Aug 02, 2006 12:32 pm

Wayne - looks as if you will be following in the footsteps of the master :wink: :D
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Postby Alex on Wed Aug 02, 2006 3:17 pm

Well done, Wayne. This photo stands out!

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Postby wally on Wed Aug 02, 2006 4:37 pm

this shot is rooly arty pirostitch, dont wanna offend anyone but she looks like a voodoo doll my sister had in her room of a friend of hers that teased her at school.
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Postby avkomp on Wed Aug 02, 2006 5:29 pm

good stuff piro,

this is a quality shot, pose and lighting work well. doesnt need eyes open

shows a momemt of reflection. well done

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