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Tom Thumb Lagoon

Postby greencardigan on Tue Aug 01, 2006 10:57 am

I finished work early yesterday and stopped by some local wetlands.

Managed to find a few birds before the light got to low.

I had trouble stopping the white feathers on the egret blowing out. Any suggestions?

Exif data as shown. Taken with the 70-200VR.

1. 200mm, f/5, 1/100, ISO 200, Matrix Metering -1.33 EV, SB-800 TTL -1.33 EV
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2. Same Exif as above
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3. Same except f/4, -1 EV
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Postby sheepie on Tue Aug 01, 2006 11:14 am

That first one is just lovely :)

Suggestion on exposure would be to use spot metering, and make sure you're using RAW (if you're not already).
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Postby greencardigan on Tue Aug 01, 2006 6:12 pm

sheepie wrote:That first one is just lovely :)

Suggestion on exposure would be to use spot metering, and make sure you're using RAW (if you're not already).

Thanks, the first one was the best of a bad bunch.

I'll try spot metering next time.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Aug 01, 2006 6:23 pm

The first is my favourite, I haven't been past the lagoon in ages I never thought to check it out for bird life, just other less savoury characters, or so the rumours go. I'd watch you back around there :)
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Postby PiroStitch on Tue Aug 01, 2006 6:56 pm

The first and 3rd are my picks. the b&w conversion doesn't do much for me.
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Postby avkomp on Tue Aug 01, 2006 7:31 pm

I like the first shot.

I photograph lots of birds and generally use centre weighted metering.

I try to avoid shooting in bright light.

as far as flash is concerned, i use a better beamer flash extender.
with white birds though you quite often have to to reduce flash power to around -2 ev,

the highlights screen becomes your friend as you get a handle on what is going on


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Postby greencardigan on Wed Aug 02, 2006 9:41 am

Alpha_7 wrote:I haven't been past the lagoon in ages I never thought to check it out for bird life, just other less savoury characters, or so the rumours go. I'd watch you back around there :)

Craig, I think you might be talking about a different lagoon. Tom Thumb lagoon is on the southern side of Wollongong. Near the steel works.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Wed Aug 02, 2006 9:42 am

greencardigan wrote:
Alpha_7 wrote:I haven't been past the lagoon in ages I never thought to check it out for bird life, just other less savoury characters, or so the rumours go. I'd watch you back around there :)

Craig, I think you might be talking about a different lagoon. Tom Thumb lagoon is on the southern side of Wollongong. Near the steel works.


Arh yes my geography is a bit off, I think I was thinking of Puckeys and whatever else it's called. my Sony. :oops:
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