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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() . Wendell Levi Teodoro
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Top stuff again! I know you were being arty and stuff, but with the third pic, is it possible to have a closer crop so you don't see the outline of the door and her elbow sticking out?
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thankyou everyone
wayne i included the door frame to add relative dimension dimension to the composition otherwise if i had cropped the edge of the door out it woudl look too vague people would wonder if it's a door or a window, i wanted it to be obvious as a door part of the pose concept girl flirting behind unfixed dooor - suggestive but perhaps the shoulder sticking out is what destroy's it, i can fix that ah and Wayne Thankyou for holding my flash for the 3rd pic, model was side lighted
Gorgeous lighting and feel to all these images Wendell. Beautifully captured. Master
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I really like the first one here Wendell - you know I'm not into the sort of shots you usually take, but this one really grabs me.
I think the fact her eyes are blue makes this pic - the rest of the pic is reasonably mono, other than the little bit of warmth in the makeup. This is offset beautifully by the eyes. Nice ![]() Predictably, the others don't do a great deal for me - but that's just me, I'm just not into this style of photography ![]() ![]() *** When getting there is half the fun! ***
Yep, number one for me, too
![]() Flawless image and one that deserves to be published in the best magazines. Top quality stuff. Cheers Michael
Wendell, good shots. #1 is a pearler perhaps a little of the right side could be cropped IMHO. #2 unfortunately doesn't work for me. The mirror image takes up a great deal of the shot but is OOF and as so much of her face is blocked out by the hair I would have expected more focus in the reflection. #3 I don't like the elbow sticking out - looks a bit distorted. #4 I think is a good shot. Like the pose and attitude.
Cheers, Mick
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