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Postby PiroStitch on Thu Jul 27, 2006 3:44 am

Have been fairly busy lately with work and organising a fairly huge step in my own life so haven't had the chance to do much photography.

Took some time out tonight and came up with this amongst other things.

Does it work, have I done too much? Any cc or ideas would be greatly appreciated.

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Postby wendellt on Thu Jul 27, 2006 4:18 am

wayne very nice light falloff

the leading lines also contribute to the strength in this image
i would just loose the frame
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Postby PiroStitch on Thu Jul 27, 2006 9:11 am

Thanks for the comments Wendell, you bloody night owl :P

Here's a version w/out the border.

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Postby Greg B on Thu Jul 27, 2006 9:22 am

That's a nice shot Wayne, well done. And I agree with Wendell (as do you!) the frame was no good.

Looking forward to seeing more along these lines.
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Postby greencardigan on Thu Jul 27, 2006 9:48 am

I agree, it looks better without the frame.

An excellent image. Love the lighting.
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Postby Geoff on Thu Jul 27, 2006 10:00 am

Very nice Wayne! Lighting is great and your PP work is also up there :)
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Postby sirhc55 on Thu Jul 27, 2006 10:57 am

Wayne - a beautiful shot that is well composed, has a story and nice colour. If I was to critique at all it would be to darken off the area (slightly) to the left of the pic, around the face :)
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Postby PiroStitch on Thu Jul 27, 2006 12:13 pm

Thanks for the CC everyone.

Chris - taken onboard and I'll work on it tonight.

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Postby avkomp on Thu Jul 27, 2006 12:20 pm

was just about to say: lose the border but as I scrolled down, I have been beaten to it.

I like the light falloff on this. works as an urban portrait.

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Postby PiroStitch on Sat Jul 29, 2006 11:31 pm

Burned out the background a bit more as suggested by Chris. What do you think now :D

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