Lotuses

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Lotuses

Postby tyrone_tong on Sat Jun 17, 2006 10:00 am

Hi all,
didn't post any photo for a long time. :roll:
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They were shot @ Hong Kong
Actually i am not sure the name of these flowers :?
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Postby Pa on Sat Jun 17, 2006 10:14 am

hi tyrone i think if you cropped the first one above the cigy it would look much better. nice photos apart from that.
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Postby tyrone_tong on Sat Jun 17, 2006 10:22 am

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Look like this :?:
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sat Jun 17, 2006 11:19 am

The new crop is much better, and the 2nd pic is nice just a shame the butterfly isn't in focus a little more.
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Postby Dug on Sat Jun 17, 2006 4:20 pm

they are indeed lotus flowers


lo·tus also lo·tos (l?'t?s)
n.
An aquatic plant (Nelumbo nucifera) native to southern Asia and Australia, having large leaves, fragrant, pinkish flowers, a broad, rounded, perforated seedpod, and fleshy rhizomes.
The edible seed, leaf, or rhizome of this plant.
Any of several similar or related plants, such as the water lilies Nymphaea caerula or N. lotus.

I like the crop of the shot I was going to ask were they were but HK is a bit far to go to get some photos :(

Nice work anyway cheers doug
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Postby blacknstormy on Sat Jun 17, 2006 4:25 pm

beautiful - almost ethereal !!!
Lighting is gorgeous ... if you didn't want to crop the first shot, you could just clone the ciggy out?
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Postby Bodak on Sat Jun 17, 2006 8:12 pm

Really very nice images.


I think I'd like the first image as was with the cigy cloned out.
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Postby Colcam on Sat Jun 17, 2006 9:05 pm

Positively ELECTRIC!
I would have cloned or healed the cig. butt out and taken the top edge off down to just under the top of the upper left leaf. i prefer the longer crop with the stalks myself.
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Postby admajic on Sat Jun 17, 2006 10:02 pm

Love the colours! Excellent
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Postby Yi-P on Sat Jun 17, 2006 10:31 pm

Oh wow, that looks like a lotus candle light rather than a flower!!

Its GLOWING in the pic!! How'd you do that? 8)
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