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Postby Pa on Sun Jun 04, 2006 6:01 pm

as the heading says, this morning wasn't the best for sunrises. anyway i took a few shots. the first is a 2 shot pano.

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this one was taken about the same time.

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c&c welcome and thanks for looking.
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Postby sheepie on Sun Jun 04, 2006 6:43 pm

Hi Pa - although the reflections here are impressive, I think they overpower the scene. Stay with a more pano-type crop, with less of the bottom part of the image, but watch for the dark side overpowering as well - I've sent you a couple of quick edits by email to have a look at.
Also, looks like you may have had some 'fingers from God' (the rays of sunlight appearing from the clouds) starting to appear, these are always a good element to concentrate on :)
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Postby Yi-P on Sun Jun 04, 2006 6:48 pm

Could be perfect if sky was brighter and diffracted light clouds... :)
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