High Seas @ Sunset

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High Seas @ Sunset

Postby stubbsy on Sat Jun 03, 2006 9:46 pm

There were monster seas today (which I almost missed - thanks Curly for the phone call) and here are a few shots taken in the fading light. ALl three shot with D2x and Nikkor 12-24 DX lens. Somehow these all have a really alien landscape feel to me. Click a pic for a larger version.

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Postby LostDingo on Sat Jun 03, 2006 9:49 pm

Great color Stubbsy :!: Like the 1st the best.

The seas were like that this morning too...very violent
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Postby Alex on Sat Jun 03, 2006 9:57 pm

Great shots, Peter. No 2 and 3 look surreal!

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Postby pharmer on Sat Jun 03, 2006 10:09 pm

All good Peter, but #3 is fantastic to my eyes, lovely curves in the foreground and sensational clouds and colour in the sky

Very nice :D
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Postby Mitchell on Sat Jun 03, 2006 10:14 pm

Awesome shots Peter.
Makes me nostalgic for my evening walks along Merewether Beach or down through King Edward Park to the Ocean Baths.
Number three is my pick. You have composed it just perfectly! :D
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Postby glamy on Sat Jun 03, 2006 10:21 pm

Peter,
Very nice shots and colours. I think that considering the colours a longer exposure (with filter) might have given an even eerier feel. You lucky #@^ :!:
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Postby suzanneg on Sat Jun 03, 2006 10:56 pm

Hi Peter,
Cool photos. Soothing colours against the rough sea. Works nicely. :D
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Postby daniel_r on Sat Jun 03, 2006 11:09 pm

Stubbsy, could you please stop posting fantastic images from Newcastle. It's not helping me decide if I should move there or not.

:lol: :lol: :lol:

Seriously, these are excellent. It's good to see that the D2x has gone into deserving and skillful hands :)

It's difficult to choose, but my pick is #2 here. You've nailed it with colour, composition and sharpness.
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Postby christiand on Sat Jun 03, 2006 11:17 pm

Peter,

great shots :D
I'm just thinking; would all these shots improve with more DOF or shorter
shutter speed ?
I think that the action in the sea demands a more agressive approach which could result in more agressive results.

My 20 cents ...
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Postby stubbsy on Sat Jun 03, 2006 11:26 pm

Thank you all for your comments.

Gerard - I left my tripod at home (it's normally in my car, but wsn't today :cry: so longer exposures were not possible)

Daniel - Newcastle is a terrible, dirty industrial city with awful drab buildings and beaches littered with rotting seaweed. Better now :D

Christian - I agree. These are all a bit soft. It was very overcast and these were the fastest shutter speed I could get with the light. I got no higher than F8 and I have a LOT of very blurry shots (bloody D2x).
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Postby sirhc55 on Sat Jun 03, 2006 11:39 pm

Very nice Peter, very nice. :)
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Postby the foto fanatic on Sat Jun 03, 2006 11:42 pm

Well done, Peter. I like the way you handle your wider lenses.

#2 is my fave - love the composition. :)
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Postby Geoff on Sat Jun 03, 2006 11:57 pm

Bloody hell Peter - these are great!

A sight for sore eyes - nicely executed. Well done mate! :D
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Postby Dug on Sun Jun 04, 2006 12:39 am

Nice stuff. Great colour.

We were supposed to get large swells and strong wind today.

It was flat as a tack.
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Postby Zeeke on Sun Jun 04, 2006 12:47 am

tomorrow Dug.. http://www.seabreeze.com.au/graphs/qld.asp btw, anyone who wants a good forecast site, ive been using seabreeze for a year, they are pretty much spot on, just select the state your in, it does the major city. so.. is fairy acurate if ur living nearby..

Peter, bloody amazing images, your making me jealous, I wish i could convince someone to take me down the beach before sunrise to get some photos!!

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Postby bindiblue on Sun Jun 04, 2006 11:49 am

Grat shots Peter,, love the colours, well done

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Postby rokkstar on Sun Jun 04, 2006 12:07 pm

All of these are excellent Peter.

Great work.
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Postby ozimax on Sun Jun 04, 2006 1:43 pm

stubbsy wrote:Daniel - Newcastle is a terrible, dirty industrial city with awful drab buildings and beaches littered with rotting seaweed. Better now :D


It may be Stubbsy but I always have liked Newcastle as a city, it has character I feel. As a kid my brother and I used to roam around Fort Scratchley, and always remember waiting in a car queue for Stockton Ferry, and swimming at the RAAF base in summer. (Sigh) Those were the good old days...with my Kodak Instamatic camera :)
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Postby radar on Sun Jun 04, 2006 1:48 pm

Well caught Peter,

still is pretty big swells today, may try to go out to Catherine Hill Bay and see what it is like over there.

Love two and three, really nice colours and nice lines.

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Postby birddog114 on Sun Jun 04, 2006 1:53 pm

radar wrote:Well caught Peter,

still is pretty big swells today, may try to go out to Catherine Hill Bay and see what it is like over there.

Love two and three, really nice colours and nice lines.

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Postby radar on Sun Jun 04, 2006 1:55 pm

birddog114 wrote:Have a good swim :lol:


Hopefully, I won't get that close :shock: :shock: :lol: :lol:
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Postby marcotrov on Sun Jun 04, 2006 2:24 pm

Bet you that's one of the first seaspray dustings for the D2x :)

Lovely images Peter, colours are fantastic. I like #1 and #3, they work best for me but the crops don't seem to enhance the images to the greatest effect IMO.

As you now have rather large files to work with with the D2X (you lucky son of a 'great woman' :lol: ) I wonder if the impact of #3 could be improved by cropping the left hand frame edge all the way to meet the curving wall just hiding the 'T' section wall coming to meet it from the left. You would then have, albeit a tighter squarer crop, but a nice leading line taking the eye around to the crashing wave and on to the gorgeous skyline.

In the first one I find the extra wooden rail and metal rail on the left of the central leading rail making the foreground a little too busy. I wonder if employing a similarly tight crop as that suggested above could make the right difference i.e. move the left hand margin over to just obscuring the white corner of the left nearside rail so that the central leading rail becomes the only prominent feature leadinjg the eyes to the crashing waves and that glorious horizon, though the slight imbalance on the left handside, created by such a crop may cause a little tension.
Sorry Peter about the longwinded response but a critical look at your great images helps me reflect more on the compositional processing I get involved in myself, hope you don't mind :)
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Postby stubbsy on Sun Jun 04, 2006 10:04 pm

THangs for the comments people.

Marco you lost me about halfway through :)

Seriously though, I think I get what you're saying and will have a go at it. I also appreciate the time and thought you put into critiques like this and generally look forward to your comments on image posts.
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