Tasman Bridge, sunrise

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Tasman Bridge, sunrise

Postby johnd on Tue May 02, 2006 10:32 pm

I've been doing some shots of the Tasman Bridge lately.
The Tasman Bridge crosses the Derwent River at Hobart.

#1: Friday morning, 6 degrees C
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#2: Monday morning, 2 degrees C
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Postby macka on Tue May 02, 2006 10:34 pm

John,

Absolutely lovely. :D
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Postby nito on Tue May 02, 2006 10:47 pm

The first shot sure makes the cold torture worthwhile. Really nice shot. :D
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Postby marcotrov on Tue May 02, 2006 10:48 pm

Beautifully exposed John.
For #1 I'd be tempted to crop it into a pano as the foreground shadowy rocks don't add anything to the image, in fact divert the eyes.
In #2 my alternate suggestion would be to crop the right edge to the first 2 humps in the golden hills near the bridge exit and to crop the bottom of the frame with the cluttered shadow/messy weed area to a point where the sun is all but in thbottom right side third of the picture. I think that adds, IMO, more impact to the whole image. Hope this makes sense John? :)
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Postby avkomp on Tue May 02, 2006 10:54 pm

nice shots.

I agree with the first one and pano crop.

I find the dark rocks lower right do not add anything to this image.

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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue May 02, 2006 10:55 pm

The first is the clear winner in my eyes, and I agree with Marco that a pano crop would give it a bit more impact!

Nicely done!
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Postby johnd on Tue May 02, 2006 10:55 pm

Thanks for the comments Macka, Nito, Marco, Steve and Craig.

I'll have a go at that cropping you're suggesting in the morning Marco.

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Postby Killakoala on Wed May 03, 2006 7:11 am

Nice images and well done braving the cold. :) It's a pity the bridge is so ugly. But perhaps sometimes there is beauty in ugliness.
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Postby johnd on Wed May 03, 2006 12:34 pm

Thanks Steve. No it isn't the most beautiful bridge. But therein lies the challenge :)

Following on from Marco's suggestion -
#1 again:
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And a slightly different one for #2:
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I think these work better than the originals.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Wed May 03, 2006 1:00 pm

Nice work John, I think both have been improved by the different crop, particularly the first one!
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Postby johnd on Wed May 03, 2006 5:59 pm

Thanks Craig.
The first one took a fair bit of judicious cloning as well to get rid of the last of the rocks.

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Postby marcotrov on Wed May 03, 2006 7:54 pm

That certainly gives the images much more impact John. Well done :)
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Postby johnd on Thu May 04, 2006 10:38 am

marcotrov wrote:That certainly gives the images much more impact John. Well done :)
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Thanks Marco. I do need to pay more attention to the best cropping of my shots. Rule of thirds etc.
Thanks again for the suggestions all, I like the shots a whole lot better know.

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Postby wmaburnett on Fri May 05, 2006 10:50 am

the first well i love the colors a lot! the sond one i like because of the sun showing through the bridge, well done!
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Postby PALL on Fri May 05, 2006 6:15 pm

the first one is simply very good and also crop worked even more well.

the second one having sun little on back and its also partialy visible inside the bridge,,it becomes little distracting.
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Postby johnd on Sun May 07, 2006 7:44 pm

Thanks PALL and wmaburnett.
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