Painting with light: Arts Centre

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Painting with light: Arts Centre

Postby PiroStitch on Tue Apr 25, 2006 7:09 pm

I spent more time last night reworking and trying to use the Arts Centre as a backdrop. Bad idea as the lights are too close together to create anything of any use when it is fully lit. Waited until it was dim and thankfully one of the lights remained illuminated as the circuitry controlling it is obviously broken :D

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The shapes are also the right way around now as I've learned how to draw them in a single motion and upside down :D
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Postby Alex on Tue Apr 25, 2006 7:14 pm

Wayne. No.2 is great. Looks like a rollacosta...

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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Apr 25, 2006 7:15 pm

Great experimentation Wayne, these are a marked improvement over your earlier trys, can't wait to see what you come up with next.
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Postby rokkstar on Tue Apr 25, 2006 7:55 pm

I really like this idea, been watching this series grow.
I think the blue one, #3 here grabs me the most. Definately definately worth refining this technique and then sending them out with a fine art tag to restaurants and magazines etc.

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Postby suzanneg on Tue Apr 25, 2006 9:34 pm

These are getting more and more interesting. I also like the blue in the last one.
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Postby stubbsy on Tue Apr 25, 2006 10:19 pm

Wayne

Masterful and getting more refined. You're on a winner here. #3 for me too.
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Postby daniel_r on Tue Apr 25, 2006 11:19 pm

These are pretty neat!

I see a modern wacky looking Eiffel tower in #2!
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