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Does this photo work?

Postby Neeper on Tue Apr 11, 2006 8:12 am

I keep looking at this picture and I keep wondering why I like it. Is it because it's different? Are the curve lines or bricks interesting enough? Does the shadow add something? What is your take?

Photo was taken on my recent trip to Puerto Vallarta, Mexico. It was a night shot about 30 sec.


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Postby avkomp on Tue Apr 11, 2006 10:23 am

I dont mind it. works for me.

Is good if you can produce a shadow which very clearly represents what a subject is up to. have seen a few of these that really do the job.

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Postby Sheila Smart on Tue Apr 11, 2006 10:27 am

Darken the shadow and you have a real winner. Well done. I like it.

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Postby RICPIC on Tue Apr 11, 2006 12:01 pm

I think it could work either way: with or without the shadow. I think the reason the shadow works is cause it diverges toward the horizon like the curves on the ground. Works for me.
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Postby mudder on Wed Apr 12, 2006 10:17 pm

I agree, the shadow almost seems to make the lines that run away part of the subject and my eyes follow the lines up, hang around the shadow then go up the lines again, works well...

The image would still work without the shadow due to the good use of leading lines, but the shadow definately makes the image more catching I reckon...
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