A pano from the wet weekend

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A pano from the wet weekend

Postby owen on Wed Feb 22, 2006 8:30 pm

Here's a pano that I put together. The post processing I did trying to emphasise the dull and dreary day. What do you think?

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Postby mudder on Wed Feb 22, 2006 9:06 pm

I like the foliage framing the TL cnr, all the highlights in the middle keep my eye in the centre, good mood coming in from the sky in the right, good positioning and framing. Not sure on the join in the horizon towards the middle and right though, is that from PP?

Taking a nice direction here mate, and well done on the pano, how may images etc?
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Postby owen on Wed Feb 22, 2006 9:17 pm

eh, only about 1 and 1/3rd, the 18mm wasn't quite wide enough and I didn't want to change lenses in the rain ;)

The join are you talking about the inconsistency in the darkness of the cloud on the horizon? The image is joined just about on the left edge of the tree.

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Postby mudder on Wed Feb 22, 2006 9:22 pm

owen wrote:... The join are you talking about the inconsistency in the darkness of the cloud on the horizon?...


Nah, sorry mate, not between the images, I meant along the horizontal horizon from about where the green hill rolls away (smack in the middle)and the more distant hill starts running away to the right... From there to the right there seems to be a bit of a halo at the join between sky and ground... Might be just me though... :?

Good mood in this image mate... Like the PP...
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