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Submarine

Postby Killakoala on Tue Feb 07, 2006 9:03 pm

One of our Collins Class submarines at anchor in Jervis Bay.

D2h + 80-200mm F2.8 - Using grad-tobacco filter on top and grad-blue on bottom both held by hand in front of the lens. (Was going to do an IR as well but ran out of time. Maybe next time.)

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Postby sirhc55 on Tue Feb 07, 2006 9:06 pm

Is it sinking :?: :roll: :lol: :lol:
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Postby Killakoala on Tue Feb 07, 2006 9:10 pm

Iz it sinking aboot wot? :)
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Postby big pix on Tue Feb 07, 2006 9:13 pm

yep that is a sub....... but is it sinking ':lol:' :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Postby avkomp on Tue Feb 07, 2006 9:19 pm

what can I say, it is a collins class, it probably is sinking!!!

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Postby sirhc55 on Tue Feb 07, 2006 9:19 pm

Thought the Collin’s class was like a Tom Collin’s glass - full of liquid :roll:
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Postby Raskill on Tue Feb 07, 2006 9:20 pm

sirhc55 wrote:Is it sinking :?: :roll: :lol: :lol:


It's meant to, the real trick is making come back up in a timely manner.... :D
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Postby curly on Tue Feb 07, 2006 9:23 pm

If it isn't sinking why is everyone outside getting ready to leave?
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Postby Raskill on Tue Feb 07, 2006 9:25 pm

They're not, they are lining up to get below deck, it goes in order of rank, the most junior member is at the end of the line... :shock:
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Postby curly on Tue Feb 07, 2006 9:46 pm

In that case it's definately sinking!
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Postby Dug on Tue Feb 07, 2006 10:04 pm

sirhc55 wrote:Is it sinking :?: :roll: :lol: :lol:


If they don't sink they are in a lot of trouble :D

Apart from early teething problems they are now a very efficient war machine. In exercises, the US navy has limiteds their operational description so they cannot "sink" too many US warships.

They have a few aircraft carrier scalps on their masts already. Very embarrassing for the most powerful navy in the world to lose a fleet flagships to a bargain basement, diesel powered, noisy, antique.
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Postby avkomp on Tue Feb 07, 2006 10:05 pm

 btw,
in terms of critique, I like the graduated filter effect.

you could have improved this if you could have shot from a slightly higher level. this would have allowed for a better seperation between the sub and the land. not to mention showing the masts better.

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Postby Dug on Tue Feb 07, 2006 10:07 pm

 PS Photographing defense hardware, are you a terrorist??
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Postby sirhc55 on Tue Feb 07, 2006 10:30 pm

Dug wrote:
sirhc55 wrote:Is it sinking :?: :roll: :lol: :lol:


If they don't sink they are in a lot of trouble :D

Apart from early teething problems they are now a very efficient war machine. In exercises, the US navy has limiteds their operational description so they cannot "sink" too many US warships.

They have a few aircraft carrier scalps on their masts already. Very embarrassing for the most powerful navy in the world to lose a fleet flagships to a bargain basement, diesel powered, noisy, antique.


The only reason that happened was because the Americans sonar reported the noise to be a pod of copulating whales - good decoy manufacturing antiques :lol:
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Postby stephen on Tue Feb 07, 2006 11:27 pm

I would rather be on a cray boat than a collins class,could drop craypots on it better than it could fire missiles.Nice shot BTW pity you couldnt get a little closer
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Postby big pix on Tue Feb 07, 2006 11:30 pm

stephen wrote:\ couldnt get a little closer


....... because its sinking..........just look, people are leaving
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Postby birddog114 on Wed Feb 08, 2006 6:32 am

Steve,
Very nice photo of a "toy".
I also like the graduated filter effect.
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Postby Killakoala on Wed Feb 08, 2006 7:13 am

Thanks all for the comments.

Firstly, NO, it's NOT sinking. :) Our Subs don't sink, they dive.

As Dug said, the Collins Class is now a very capable war machine since the bugs have been sorted out with the noise and fire control issues of the early days.

Steve (Avkomp) - I couldn't get any higher as i was on 04 deck of my ship already. Next step up would be a helicopter :) (Or a ladder)

Dug - I am a photographer, not a terrorist. :) (Onyx has a t-shirt with that comment written on it.) BTW, i am an ex-submariner too, but on the old Oberon boats.
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Postby xerubus on Wed Feb 08, 2006 7:29 am

Steve... I like the shot alot... interesting use of filters....

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Postby Matt. K on Wed Feb 08, 2006 7:35 am

Steve
Beautiful shot. It looks like the monster of the loch. Very clever use of the filters too.
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Postby huynhie on Wed Feb 08, 2006 7:46 am

I have to agree with Matt.

Nice shot, great use of the two filters.
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Postby Mj on Wed Feb 08, 2006 9:58 am

Nice shot under the circumstances... thinking that they are probably just stuck in the mud and working out how to get out??? Or maybe drawing straws on who is taking the crows nest position before they dive???
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Postby Alpha_7 on Wed Feb 08, 2006 10:05 am

I like the shot, and intersting use of two filters.

I have to admit when I read tobacco filter, I was wondering.. I thougth for a second you where using the tranparent wrapper of a pack of ciggies as a filter... then I realise I was stupid.
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Postby avkomp on Wed Feb 08, 2006 12:10 pm

I figured you were already on 04 deck, was just a comment.

used to work for the navy and then adi. while ago now though.
communications initially but computers and radar later

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