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Postby LIVE4EVA on Thu Feb 02, 2006 2:24 pm

Hey all just after some comments on this one that i snapped last night.

<img src="http://www.newenglandphotographers.net/modules/mx_smartor/album.php?smartor_mode=album_pic&pic_id=54">

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Postby radar on Thu Feb 02, 2006 3:20 pm

Hi Live4eva,

I would probably crop the rhs trees out and the bottom to get rid of the wire. You may even look at cloning out the little antenna at the top of the tower.

Don't get me wrong, I like the shot :), just needs a bit more to really make it stand out, but that is just MHO,

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Postby LIVE4EVA on Thu Feb 02, 2006 4:20 pm

Nah thanks for the advise, this shot was straight from the camera(well after shrinking it)
i am planning on cropping but i didnt think about the antenna
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Postby greencardigan on Thu Feb 02, 2006 4:29 pm

Quite nice...

I think it would have been nicer with the moon a bit further away from the church.

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Postby Gordon on Thu Feb 02, 2006 4:44 pm

greencardigan wrote:Quite nice...

I think it would have been nicer with the moon a bit further away from the church.

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360000km not far enough for you? :lol:

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Postby greencardigan on Thu Feb 02, 2006 4:45 pm

I was waiting for that comment :lol:
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Postby big pix on Thu Feb 02, 2006 5:06 pm

I could move the moon for you and make it bigger if you want........
EDIT .... and add a few stars......
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Postby Raskill on Thu Feb 02, 2006 5:11 pm

I like it, maybe some PPing, but for straight out the camera I'd be happy with it.

I like the moon next to the cross, if you wanted to read symbolism into it, it could be seen as the sign of islam next to christianity.....

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