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Alex
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Alisa Pt. IIAfter taking a lot of the comments on-board. I processed the rest of Alisa's photos and try to keep the skin tones as close to real as possible. Here are a few samples. The complete gallery can be found at http://agitlits.m6.net/NikonD70/Alisa/index.htm
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Nice work, by far my favourite is the first shot, I really like it, the only minor issue I have is the 2 hairs falling on her face, if you could carefully remove them I think this shot would be complete.
#5 and #6 I also like they appear to be a little more naturally posed a few of the others are a little ridged or tense and it makes the shots a little awkward.
ALex
I didn't comment on the previous posts since it had pretty much all been said (I wasn't a fan of the PP), but you've really got it right here. These work wonderfully well. My favourites are the first 2. Of the rest, #4 and #6 don't really work for me as they don't seem natural poses ie they are a bit stiff and Alisa looks uncomfortable. Peter
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Some nice shots there Alex...
Only spoilt (in my eyes) by the T-Shirt she is wearing... I wonder how many of the young people who wear those things realise that they are promoting a brand that celebrates a prominent American racist???? Last edited by leek on Mon Jan 16, 2006 11:10 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Well done Alex I'm with Craig here I really like #1 but the first three a great. Ditto stubsy with rest. You might want to clone out the fly in #3 just undert he swish under the 'u' in dutch
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Alex,
Compare to the previously threads, You have mastered them well. Great works!!!! Birddog114
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