Eight Legged Silhouette

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Eight Legged Silhouette

Postby ozonejunkie on Fri Dec 23, 2005 10:10 pm

I took this pic the other night against the moon. What do people think? I don't mind it in a bizarre way, but others i speak to can't see the point to it. :D

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Any comments/critiques/opinions are welcomed, and desired. :D

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Postby DaveB on Fri Dec 23, 2005 10:42 pm

I like it, although the OOF moon almost looks more like a lamp.

I think it would be improved by having the thread more vertical: it just feels a bit too tilted.
Also I think the image would be stronger without the colour fringing around the silhouette (it's chromatic aberration that seems to radiate from the centre of the frame [although I know you cropped this]). Maybe it was an issue with the 100-300mm lens wide-open at 300mm? Was the lens focussed accurately on the spider?

Those are just little things, but I think they would help. Nice job regardless!
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Postby Matt. K on Fri Dec 23, 2005 11:06 pm

A very creative and strong image! Would make a great poster for a scary film...just add text. Well done and thanks for posting!
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Postby ozonejunkie on Fri Dec 23, 2005 11:55 pm

Yes, that distortion would be most likely be because of the end of the range focal length on that lense. I tried to bring it in to 250ish, but the positioning wouldn't let me.

I tried to remove a bit of the distortion in photoshop, this is the result: I think there is a slight difference. :D

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Postby Alpha_7 on Sat Dec 24, 2005 12:31 am

Tristan, I reckon you've done well, it really has the nightmare horror movie feel to it, and you've done well to get the focus as sharp as you have.. that fact I can see the thread, and also the hairs on the spiders legs... all with the moon in the background. Do you know what kind of spider it was ? This image conjures up so many others in my head, firstly the book The Ironman, then secondly a cartoon mix between batman and spiderman.
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