A couple of shots from the last few days ...

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A couple of shots from the last few days ...

Postby DStrom on Tue Nov 22, 2005 1:46 pm

Been busy moving, but I had a little time to head out and take some shots...

Some locals looking for some breakfast
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Late last night at Balmoral
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Postby Oneputt on Tue Nov 22, 2005 2:54 pm

That late night shot is super. Love the sublte tones. :D
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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Nov 22, 2005 2:59 pm

I really like the late night one as well. Can you post the Exif Data ?
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Postby marcotrov on Tue Nov 22, 2005 3:05 pm

A couple of interesting shots #1 wonderfully vivid colour and a quirkiness to it. The selective focus is a great idea particularly with the unusual head tilt but the eye on the subject is not sharp enough. For a shot like this to work you need to nail that sharpness. Also the quirky glance of the bird tends to lead the viewers eye out of frame.
#2 I would have probably tried in B7W or sepia and less sharpening as the halo effect is quite evident. Good use of rails, bridge and pier lights to lead eyes into scene and to the building. Nice shot.
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Postby DStrom on Wed Nov 23, 2005 10:58 am

Oneputt wrote:That late night shot is super. Love the sublte tones. :D


Thanks! :D

Alpha_7 wrote: I really like the late night one as well. Can you post the Exif Data ?


Thanks Alpha, exif data bellow, if it looks a little odd its probably because of the program I used to extract it.

Exif:
Make NIKON CORPORATION
Model NIKON D70
Orientation TopLeft
SamplesPerPixel 3
Resolution Unit Inch
CreatorTool Ver.2.00
ModifyDate 2005-11-21T11:33:01
ExposureTime 300/10
FNumber 80/10
Exposure Program Manual
DateTimeOriginal 2005-11-21T11:33:01
DateTimeDigitized 2005-11-21T11:33:01
ExposureBiasValue 0/6
MaxApertureValue 36/10
Metering Mode Pattern
Light Source Unknown
FocalLength 180/10
Sensing Method OneChipColorAreaSensor
FileSource 3
SceneType 1
CustomRendered 1
Exposure Mode Manual
WhiteBalance 0
DigitalZoomRatio 1
FocalLengthIn35mmFilm 27
DateTimeOriginal 2005-11-21T11:33:01

marcotrov wrote:A couple of interesting shots #1 wonderfully vivid colour and a quirkiness to it. The selective focus is a great idea particularly with the unusual head tilt but the eye on the subject is not sharp enough. For a shot like this to work you need to nail that sharpness. Also the quirky glance of the bird tends to lead the viewers eye out of frame.


I'll see if they come back this week end, might be able to get some better / more shots.

marcotrov wrote:#2 I would have probably tried in B7W or sepia and less sharpening as the halo effect is quite evident. Good use of rails, bridge and pier lights to lead eyes into scene and to the building. Nice shot.
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I will give the B&W and Sepia a try and post them here once they are done, I'll also be a little more careful with sharpening, though I think that had more to do with the fact that I am not used to using gimp to convert images, I normally use capture :)
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Postby avkomp on Wed Nov 23, 2005 1:06 pm

really like the second shot.
I like how the fence breaks up the shot and the overall dark, brooding feel to this.

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Postby DStrom on Thu Nov 24, 2005 10:31 am

avkomp wrote:really like the second shot.
I like how the fence breaks up the shot and the overall dark, brooding feel to this.

Steve


Thanks! :D

B&W and Sepia versions of the same image.

<img src="http://www.sundstromimages.com/albums/Balmoral/balmoral_bw.sized.jpg">

<img src="http://www.sundstromimages.com/albums/Balmoral/balmoral_sepia.sized.jpg">

looks like there is a fair bit of jpg compression artifacts in both images after I have uploaded them to gallery, and I have lost some of the highlight details for the sepia one, but I think it was worth it for the overall effect ...
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Postby Alpha_7 on Thu Nov 24, 2005 11:01 am

I like the sepia one, over the b&w.
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Postby mudder on Thu Nov 24, 2005 1:08 pm

G'day Dave,
Love the quizzical look from the Lorikeet(?) with his mate in the background...

The night shot is terrific, assume the starburst light effect is from a small apertue, but have no idea what 80/10 means in the EXIF :? Really like the sepia effect, wondering about the loss of highlight detail though?
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Postby DStrom on Thu Nov 24, 2005 6:59 pm

Alpha_7 wrote:I like the sepia one, over the b&w.


I agree with you there, the sepia one seems a little more dramatic ...

mudder wrote:G'day Dave,
Love the quizzical look from the Lorikeet(?) with his mate in the background...

The night shot is terrific, assume the starburst light effect is from a small apertue, but have no idea what 80/10 means in the EXIF :? Really like the sepia effect, wondering about the loss of highlight detail though?


Thanks mudder!

I didnt use a star filter, it was shot at f8 over 30 seconds, the program I used to extract the EXIF is in Linux and I think it didnt convert any of the data to make it easy to read.

As for the highlight loss, if you have a look at the B&W shot you should see a difference on the side of the shed.
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Postby jethro on Thu Nov 24, 2005 7:06 pm

Number 2 cranks!
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Postby ABG on Thu Nov 24, 2005 7:34 pm

Both shots are great! In particular, I really like the second shot and definitely prefer the original monochromatic version you posted to the subsequesnt B/W and sepia versions.

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Postby marcotrov on Thu Nov 24, 2005 8:24 pm

Yeah Dave the Sepia one is great, Pity the detail in the bridge boardwalk has been lost but overall I prefer the Sepia tone. Well done :)
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