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A city sleeps

Postby stubbsy on Sun Nov 13, 2005 10:18 pm

My pick of the shots from the night shoot on 12/11. Click a pic to see a larger version. I'd never been to Mrs Macquarie's Chair before and it was a great spot for a night shoot, plus it was good fun chimping with the others that were there :wink:

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24-120 VR, 20 sec, F8
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Postby Geoff on Sun Nov 13, 2005 10:22 pm

Peter - number two is BEAUTIFUL!
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Postby NJ on Sun Nov 13, 2005 10:23 pm

those images are so sharp! what lens did you use for them?
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Postby marcotrov on Sun Nov 13, 2005 10:34 pm

Beautifully exposed Peter they are all standouts. I would have been tempted to include a little less of pale blue sky and a little more of that beautiful colured reflection in the watery foreground in both #1 and #3. Particularly in #1 the play of light on the shimmering water really is appealing. Having said that the balance you have created in your crop works well too! :)
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Postby big pix on Sun Nov 13, 2005 10:34 pm

Peter your work has improved a great deal.......... great pix's.......
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Postby Katie G on Sun Nov 13, 2005 11:11 pm

I really like the third one, the reflections are really pretty. I like the clouds as it makes the shots look 'real'.
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Postby cc@t on Sun Nov 13, 2005 11:22 pm

Peter - they look so good they could be postcards.
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Postby ozczecho on Sun Nov 13, 2005 11:44 pm

My fave is #1 the silhouette - reminds me of what Auckland must have looked when they had a black out a few years back :D

#2 seems crooked to me :shock: or is it just my eyes telling me go to bed....
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Postby jethro on Mon Nov 14, 2005 8:50 am

Stubbsy is number 2 stitched?

I had a go at this same shot in daylight and managed it with 5 images.
This is a cracker of a shot.

I think iv'e said once before, try selling these to Sydney City Council
or the Harbour Authority.

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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Nov 14, 2005 8:53 am

I think he was using the 12-24 which I'm guessing is maybe wide enough at that distance to do it in one shot. (But I'm just guessing).
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Postby BBJ on Mon Nov 14, 2005 11:00 am

Peter, i like #2+3 but #2 looks like it is not quiet level, but still great pics mate, all you Sydney siders make me jealous with all these nice nite shots.
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Postby stubbsy on Mon Nov 14, 2005 12:40 pm

Thank you all for your comments.

#2 seems a little contentious doesn't it. If you look above each image I give the lens and some other details. You'll see this was taken with the 24-120 VR which can go wide enough (just) at 24 to get this from Mrs Mac's chair. There is a tiny amount of spherical distortion in the centre, however the image is pretty straight (I checked before I posted). I think the real issue is that there's a little optical illusion at play because the RHS has darker water.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Nov 14, 2005 12:52 pm

Well Peter that is one good looking optical illusion :) Better then looking at two seemingly bent parrallel lines :)
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Postby moggy on Mon Nov 14, 2005 12:54 pm

Love 'em all Peter, particularly #3. :wink:

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Postby stubbsy on Mon Nov 14, 2005 7:39 pm

Thanks Bob
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Postby Potatis on Mon Nov 14, 2005 10:49 pm

I thought I'd responded to this thread already. Hmm obviously not.

Peter I love #2 & #3. Great stuff! :) Wonderful colours, and great composition. I've really enjoyed looking at all your posts. Thanks. :)
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Postby NetMagi on Tue Nov 15, 2005 5:01 pm

first shot is definetely my fav

the skyline warmed by the reflections on the water balances very well

would make a great poster

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Postby Maximus on Wed Nov 16, 2005 12:19 am

2nd and 3rd are the standouts imo - they look like part of a series that should be in a coffee table book about Aus.
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Postby stubbsy on Wed Nov 16, 2005 9:32 am

Doug, Rich & Maximus. Thanks for the comments.

Maximus - interestingly those two pics WILL be in a coffee table book. I'm just finishing off a Momento book of my best images of the year to be gifts for a few people this year and those two are in the book.
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Postby sirhc55 on Wed Nov 16, 2005 9:41 am

OK Peter - for my choice #1 - it reminds me that a city does sleep and when we sleep the lights are out - it also reminds me of a battleship :wink:
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Postby Oneputt on Wed Nov 16, 2005 10:27 am

I'm with Chris Peter. I prefer no 1, which I think is very good. :D I think it just has that little more atmosphere than the others
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Postby Maximus on Wed Nov 16, 2005 6:45 pm

stubbsy wrote:Maximus - interestingly those two pics WILL be in a coffee table book. I'm just finishing off a Momento book of my best images of the year to be gifts for a few people this year and those two are in the book.



That is good news. Some shots deserve to be shared to a wider audience than just these forums and a few friends. :)
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Postby Catcha on Wed Nov 16, 2005 6:48 pm

Peter No. 2 takes the cake :D
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Postby stephen on Thu Jan 05, 2006 11:28 pm

Stunning shots Peter you could defineatly sell them to sydney council as promos.Can i ask were they handheld or not??.
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Postby stubbsy on Fri Jan 06, 2006 10:34 am

stephen wrote:Stunning shots Peter you could defineatly sell them to sydney council as promos.Can i ask were they handheld or not??.

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All were tripod shots and all were longish exposures of at least 5 seconds.
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