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Postby stubbsy on Sun Oct 30, 2005 4:59 pm

Four pics of some sculpture inside the SBS building North Sydney (unfortunately NOT accessible to the public - I was there on official business).
All shots were taken with the 20/2.8 Nikkor lens + SB800 with Lightsphere PJ

To see larger versions, click the image.

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Postby Matt. K on Sun Oct 30, 2005 5:07 pm

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Postby LostDingo on Sun Oct 30, 2005 5:12 pm

you did well with the your lighting and capture Peter, great work and the artwork is pretty fascinating too :!:
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Postby drifter on Sun Oct 30, 2005 5:13 pm

I agree well done . The first three are terrific . Particulary like the third one .
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Postby leek on Sun Oct 30, 2005 5:20 pm

I love masks anyway but there are many symbolic references in those two masks -
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the man has his eyes open - the woman not...
the man is on a square pedestal and the woman on a round one...

It's amazing how much artwork is stashed away behind corporate security...
Well done for capturing some of it Stubbsy... well shot...
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Postby sirhc55 on Sun Oct 30, 2005 5:27 pm

Excellent work Peter :D
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Postby Geoff on Sun Oct 30, 2005 5:29 pm

Love them Peter! Bel and I were in there ourselves on a 'tour' a few weeks back when we met new member to the forum Abet who works there at SBS :) Small world.
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Postby Manta on Sun Oct 30, 2005 5:33 pm

Well spotted opportunity Peter and beautifully captured. You and Leek have both been excellent ambassadors for the Lightsphere with these and other recent shots. It just gives such a balanced, flattering light that almost seems to defy the fact that flash was used at all.

Great images.
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Postby Jeko70 on Sun Oct 30, 2005 5:33 pm

Great!
Well done Stubbsy,
Very impressive!

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Postby ozczecho on Sun Oct 30, 2005 5:37 pm

Stubbsy, the ligthing on these is 1st class. Excellent work.
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Postby Ben on Sun Oct 30, 2005 5:47 pm

nice captures stubbsy, great work

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Postby rokkstar on Sun Oct 30, 2005 7:36 pm

oooh man, they look surreal. Like a Kubrickian set. Lovely lighting, well handled and terrific subject matter. Nice shots Peter.
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Postby PiroStitch on Sun Oct 30, 2005 7:47 pm

Ahh gotta love the 20mm :D

Well captured Stubbsy, it looks very surreal indeed. I just noticed that the top left of the male mask is a bit blown..or is it? Also the female mask looks like it's crying as there are streaks coming out of her eyes.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Oct 30, 2005 7:50 pm

Great shots Peter, and I agree with rokkstar that is has a very Kubrick feel with those spooky masks. Beautifully captured.
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Postby stubbsy on Sun Oct 30, 2005 7:58 pm

PiroStitch wrote:Ahh gotta love the 20mm :D

Well captured Stubbsy, it looks very surreal indeed. I just noticed that the top left of the male mask is a bit blown..or is it? Also the female mask looks like it's crying as there are streaks coming out of her eyes.

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Spot on in both regards. The top left of the male mask is slightly blown. Happened when I altered the contrast and I was too lazy to layer it to fix (original is OK).

The female mask has noticeable streaks running down the face from the eyes - more so in person than in the pic. I suspect it was an intentional thing by the sculptor, but who knows.

Haven't yet taken the plunge on the 20/2.8 yet, but this pushes me damn close. At first I though t it was abit soft, but I took whole stack of shots of a brick wall using a tripod and confirmed the softness was more my hand holding technique than the lens.
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Postby abet on Mon Oct 31, 2005 10:08 am

Funny that, the place looks really bright. I was going to photograph the same thing but for some reason, probably because the building is familiar to me, the tone's going to be a little bit different. Great to see another person's perspective on the foyer.

Thanks for the heads up Geoff! Good to know you liked the tour.
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Postby stubbsy on Mon Oct 31, 2005 7:47 pm

Thanks one and all for your comments and feedback.

Leek - This area has a great feel and it's a shame the interesting artworks there are not publicly accessible. Of course it means it doesn't get vandalised. The staff at SBS are lucky.

Abet - I look forward to seeing your interpretation. I'd have liked to have spent longer there since this area looks so interesting from all sorts of angles.
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Postby ozimax on Mon Oct 31, 2005 8:08 pm

#3 in outstandingly surreal for me, colour is spectacular and composition is unusual, great image, Max
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Postby stubbsy on Mon Oct 31, 2005 9:00 pm

The response to #3 is particularly heartening since I spent about 1 minute on PP (removed color cast, bumped exposure) and then another 30 minutes experimenting with different crops to arrive at the finished image. For interest, and to demonstrate just what a difference a crop makes, here is the uncropped version of the 3rd shot.

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Postby mic on Mon Oct 31, 2005 9:33 pm

I love those faces Stubbsy, I would love to have them in my new backyard.

Would make an interesting BBQ conversation.

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Postby stubbsy on Mon Oct 31, 2005 11:57 pm

mic wrote:I love those faces Stubbsy, I would love to have them in my new backyard.

Would make an interesting BBQ conversation.

Mic. :wink:

So if there's a break and enter at the SBS building and a few sculptures disappear we'll know where to send the police :wink:
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Postby Willy wombat on Tue Nov 01, 2005 12:06 am

Magic images stubbsy. I like the first two a lot. They looks terrific.
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Postby Greg B on Tue Nov 01, 2005 7:13 am

Very impressive Peter, #3 is special. I like the fishing rods on #4 too. :D
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Postby stubbsy on Tue Nov 01, 2005 1:42 pm

Willy, Greg, Thanks

Greg - that sculpture is strange. The weights on the end of the rods swing free and have inscibed arcs onto the wall - presumably as people bumped them when they walk past (it's in a corridor)
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