Tortured Warratah???

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Tortured Warratah???

Postby LostDingo on Fri Oct 21, 2005 7:09 am

Since moving to digital I have found it it immensely fun and flexible to have a bit of a play with images.
After a stressful day at work I took my frustrations out on a Warratah. I carefully strangled the flower and forced it to succumb to full flash pops and hideously long timed exposures. After this torturous regime I then desatuarted it's leaves and framed it in black.

What's your opinion?


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Postby Killakoala on Fri Oct 21, 2005 7:23 am

Really nice. A great way to focus on the beautiful red of the flower. However you may have missed a bit of desaturation below the flower on two leaves.

Nice work.
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Postby xerubus on Fri Oct 21, 2005 7:57 am

great capture... i really like this and the pp works quite well.

if i was to be absolutely nit picky i'd say clone out the little orange line in the background at the top right... :wink:

well done.

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Postby Nikon boy on Fri Oct 21, 2005 7:58 am

I really like this, well done i reckon it would print up nicely
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Postby Potatis on Fri Oct 21, 2005 8:39 am

I think this is excellent. Very well done! :D
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Postby stubbsy on Fri Oct 21, 2005 1:11 pm

Great pic, well post processed. Print & frame.
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Postby marcotrov on Fri Oct 21, 2005 1:24 pm

Lovely treatment and with a perfect specimen it would be a work of art. Lighting is well balanced and great framing applied. Well done!
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Postby Oneputt on Fri Oct 21, 2005 1:28 pm

Tortured??? That warratah looks very happy to me. :D Lovely image, thank you for sharing it.
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Postby LostDingo on Fri Oct 21, 2005 6:34 pm

Killakoala - appreciate the comments and I may concentrate in that area and see what I can cleanup. In all honesty I didn't spend a great deal of time on it

Oneputt - not quite as happy as me with my red but was not overly abused

marcotrov -much appreciated, hard to be the balance fill on the SB800!

stubbsy-working on the print, framing is next :D

Potatis -thanks! You have an excellent tripod now so......... :wink:

Nikon boy -I am counting on it 8)

xerubus-appreciate the suggestions and definitely worth a go at

All, really appreciate the feedback and suggestions, I always like to hear from different persepectives and the suggestions you may have.

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Postby blacknstormy on Fri Oct 21, 2005 6:45 pm

Paul - what a beautiful photo, and fantastic idea to desaturate the leaves. It really will frame up a treat......mmmmm....... will have to go out and try this one !!
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Postby Manta on Fri Oct 21, 2005 6:50 pm

Can't disagree with the previous comments regarding improvements Paul but, as my learned colleagues have themselves admitted, it was a pretty special piece of work to start with. Very graphic and in-your-face but still retaining the delicate nuances when you look deeper.

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Postby the foto fanatic on Fri Oct 21, 2005 7:19 pm

And I was hoping for a picture of Wendell Sailor in his new sky-blue jersey. :wink:

Very nice pic. :)
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