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playing with BOUNCEtook this portrait with natural sunlight behind the subject, with bounce to fill her face...wondering how you guys find the colour of her face from the soft gold bounce ? critiques appreciated
![]() Last edited by flipfrog on Tue Oct 11, 2005 3:54 pm, edited 3 times in total.
Dee. i think it is a very nice shot, the lighting is spot on for me and doesnt take too much away from her face, loverly shot in my books well done.
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Dee I think that it is better than just a good shot, I love it and the lighting. As a matter of interest what did you bounce the flash off? Were you using a refelector?
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yup
done with a soft gold reflector, a gift that i received for doing a photo shoot for a friend i was a bit concerned witht he colour off her face..but seems that u guys think its okay huh?
Dee,
It is a delightful and charming shot in many ways but you are quite correct in raising issues about the colour of the face - and to that I would add that I feel there are issues with the contrast on the face. What colour was the reflective object? The rendering has gone quite sallow and I am sure the young lady has a far more healthy glow than that. I have used gold reflectors of various kinds and I have seen the work of many others with gold reflectors and they all have the one thing in common - they are diabolical in terms of quality work. (Not that I am sure that you used gold but it has been mentioned.) What I did invariably do with any battery flashes that I used was to dismantle the head and place a Wratten 81a gel behind the fresnel just to knock the excessive cool edge off the bare illumination. Terry O'Neil devised a technique with exterior portraiture which Annie L has also colonised which is to use very high powered flashes as a key-light rather than a fill. This result approaches that situation - and quite pleasingly, I have to say - but the colour is a distraction as is the fact that the pupils of the eyesappear quite clouded through possibly lack of contrast. Cheers, _______________
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Dee,
You posted your last response as I was writing mine and so, yes, what you see here is the classic undertones of a greenish cast resulting from the gold reflector. I find that WHITE is the best reflective surface for this type of thing .... or if the range is greater perhaps silver can be used for added punch. Cheers, _______________
Walter "Photography was not a bastard left by science on the doorstep of art, but a legitimate child of the Western pictorial tradition." - Galassi
I thought that the golden glow to her skin was quite appealing
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To each his own, Oneputt,
I might be able to handle a golden glow, as you put it, but green is a tad unhealthy looking for me. _______________
Walter "Photography was not a bastard left by science on the doorstep of art, but a legitimate child of the Western pictorial tradition." - Galassi
Very cool shot, Dee.
![]() I agree that it would be better, actually perfect, without the green cast. ![]() my gallery of so-so photos
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thanks guys for the responses...
at least i dont think im going crazy ![]() im also wondering if it has anything to do with shooting in RAW... seems all my portraits shot in RAW come out greenish and i find its a biatch getting it right in the white balance adjustment... this is even without bounce.... anyone else notice this with RAW and white balance?
When I first acquired my D70 a lot of my images had a green cast which is apprently quite common. Sadly I have forgotten how I overcame the problem
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I used to set the Hue to -2 for JPGs, IIRC... ![]() ![]() But, if you're shooting NEF, it should be a very easy fix, just fuss with the WB to get the color you want, save it as a preset and then you're set for any like lighting conditions. For example set the WB to daylight, direct sunlight and adjust it a little cooler to see if that fixes it. Assuming you have Capture, you can also fuss with the Color Balance sliders too, on Tool Palette 1. Using a - setting on the Green slider gives you more red, I think.... my gallery of so-so photos
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excellent work as usual
the green tone on the face is very subtle i don't really notice Pose and expression is great, the highlighted corona of the hair and the differential focus of the weeds all looks right I would suggest a revisit on the fashion, clothes have a dramatic overall effect. You can use certain colours to exentuate the face.
Dee, here's a quickie I did in PSP.
I used the color balance control that is similar to Capture's to turn down the green a couple notches. Then I added a little contrast and sharpening, boosted colors just a tad. I think it looks fine now, but am tired, so may not be seeing colors properly.... ![]() ![]() my gallery of so-so photos
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