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Mate at the campfire

PostPosted: Fri Nov 23, 2007 9:58 pm
by RichardW
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 23, 2007 10:46 pm
by Matt. K
Hi RichardW
I like the composition and I like the dark, Rembrantesque colours. You might cop some flack from some of the forum members in relation to it being under-exposed but I think if this is the effect you were after then you nailed it. My only criticism would be that you need a more attractive model. :D

PostPosted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 6:45 am
by RichardW
Thanks for the C&C. :)
Yep, I could have have cranked up the exposure however I wasn't trying to shoot a pretty model in a studio under lights just a mate in the natural environment around the campfire.

PostPosted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 10:55 am
by phillipb
Hope you don't mind Richard, I did some pp on your photo. What do you think?

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 2:05 pm
by RichardW
No problem. Looks like you've also upped the exposure and added some red for the campfire.
Here's one with the exposure cranked up and the red reduced.
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 6:04 pm
by zafra52
I tis a nice portrait, but I believe it would be even a nicer image if you could get rid of the the metal background and add a touch more colour to the last image.