Deep in Thought - B&W version added
Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 10:53 amC&C Appreciated
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Deep in Thought - B&W version added
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 10:53 amPosted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 11:09 am* Larger aperture for more subject emphasis.
Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 11:18 amI find the background - the orange stuff - distracting, and would have preferred mayb e a different angle, or maybe a tighter crop, because of that.
Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 11:31 amThanks for the tips guys - much appreciated.
Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 12:48 pmI agree 100% with what Gary has said and thought it before I read what he had suggested. The orange tape is an eye sore and detracts from the girl.
Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 12:50 pmTouche David, the orange distracts, but good subject matter nonetheless.
Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 2:17 pmPossibly go black'n'white and/or clone out the fence if there's enough detail in the plant matter in the background. Depending on the image size, you might also go landscape?
Other than that, yeah, what the others said
Nice pose.
Other than that, yeah, what the others said
Nice pose.Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 2:38 pmThanks for all the advice guys!
A different crop and B&W:
A different crop and B&W:
Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 2:43 pmThe new crop is an improvement, however, the tones of her pants and the background are too closely match. Shame you couldn't ask her to remove them? 
Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 7:31 pmI find the second a great improvemt. There are time when colour is NOT the go.
Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 7:59 pmMr Darcy wrote:I find the second a great improvemt. There are time when colour is NOT the go.
You are right. Normallly I'm not a fan of B&W but it's definately made this one look a lot better.