Hi Russell
I don't like to see a thread like this go unanswered, so here goes:
- I think the DOF is very shallow. This is always an issue with macro photography, so you need to control lighting and camera settings to give you a deeper DOF. A tripod is usually recommended for macro photography, as this allows you to use a lower shutter speed.
- The pop-up flash is not ideal for this type of work. It gives a very flat result, and in pix like this one where there is texture involved, you need a larger light source to give a more wrap-around effect.
- Choose your subject carefully. Some things are just not that interesting, and unfortunately, this pipe wrench is one of them. I think you may have to either step back and photograph it in the context of a work-bench (in other words, not macro), or alternatively, go even closer and highlight smaller sections to portray shape and texture.
Hope this is helpful.
