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portrait shoot for C&C

PostPosted: Sat Sep 15, 2007 11:36 pm
by Oz_Beachside
hello, love to hear your feedback on some shots from today.
Had a lot of fun, and love the WB preset with my new expo disc!

look forward to your feedback, warmest regards, bruce.

#1 - anyone for tennis?
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#2 - touch of tomb raider
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#3 - they dont make can openers like they used to...
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let me know you have been here, and drop in a comment :D

PostPosted: Sat Sep 15, 2007 11:40 pm
by Reschsmooth
Nice shots (and yeah, pretty girl :D )

My criticisms of the first are:

1. The crinkling of the "ground" in the first is a little off-putting.
2. I would like to see the model's face in no 1 with a bit more lighting.

PostPosted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 9:57 am
by Oz_Beachside
thanks for your feedback patrick, much appreciated.

I thought the same, high contract lighting makes for very careful posing variations in between.

on the tennis one, I cloned out some of the wrinkles in the fabric, just left that one there. I think it might be better in the future, to pin that ribbon down, and maybe tape the fabric to the floor...