Yet another total eclipse of the heart...

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Yet another total eclipse of the heart...

Postby Nnnnsic on Wed Aug 29, 2007 9:48 pm

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Postby stubbsy on Wed Aug 29, 2007 10:02 pm

Leigh

Both of these are amongst the best I've seen here. Love all the stars in #2

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Postby phillipb on Wed Aug 29, 2007 10:14 pm

My guess is the world renowned Adobe telescope. :wink: :lol:
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Postby Matt. K on Wed Aug 29, 2007 10:18 pm

I'm guessing the stars were added? And...how do I know?
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Postby Killakoala on Wed Aug 29, 2007 10:22 pm

Nice and clever Leigh.
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Postby Geoff on Wed Aug 29, 2007 10:23 pm

PP or not - this is a great image Leigh.
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Postby Nnnnsic on Wed Aug 29, 2007 10:29 pm

The stars are from the same shot, I just took the same image and pulled the curves all the way up and removed the moon from the top layer. No raw adjustments, though.

And EXIF says D200, 80-400mm at 400mm, f5.6, 1 second, ISO 640
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Postby Eugene-K on Wed Aug 29, 2007 11:04 pm

Very nice! But I like the first one more. Looks more naturally to me
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Postby MCWB on Wed Aug 29, 2007 11:27 pm

Great stuff Leigh, I like the crop, it works well! Stars in the second are a little strange, but look cool so what the hell eh. :D
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Postby Pehpsi on Wed Aug 29, 2007 11:51 pm

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Postby adam on Thu Aug 30, 2007 1:09 am

Looks good!
the 2nd one is a case where hot pixels and noise add to the photograph! :D
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Postby iluxa on Thu Aug 30, 2007 9:15 am

The first photo is very good (stars are not dominating).

CCD/CMOS noise? (just kidding :lol: )
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Postby gstark on Thu Aug 30, 2007 10:40 am

Nnnnsic wrote:The stars are from the same shot, I just took the same image and pulled the curves all the way up and removed the moon from the top layer. No raw adjustments, though.

And EXIF says D200, 80-400mm at 400mm, f5.6, 1 second, ISO 640


And IIRC, Leigh didn't have a tripod with him either, so these will be handheld.

I prefer the more conservative look of the first.
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Postby xorl on Thu Aug 30, 2007 1:25 pm

Nice work Leigh. Great approach to a common subject - I wish I'd thought of it :).
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Postby ATJ on Thu Aug 30, 2007 5:17 pm

Nnnnsic wrote:And EXIF says D200, 80-400mm at 400mm, f5.6, 1 second, ISO 640

'cept there is no EXIF on the images as present. :P

I was amazed how bright the moon was before and after the eclipse. I was able to shoot at f/8 and 1/125" (ISO 200) which is only 3 stops less than what I'd use in full Sun (f/16 1/ISO).
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Postby gstark on Thu Aug 30, 2007 5:35 pm

ATJ wrote:I was amazed how bright the moon was before and after the eclipse.


Don't be amazed; this is normal. :)

That's one of the traps in shooting the moon; people tend to forget that it's actually a brightly lit object - it's light source being the sun.
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Postby ATJ on Thu Aug 30, 2007 5:53 pm

gstark wrote:
ATJ wrote:I was amazed how bright the moon was before and after the eclipse.


Don't be amazed; this is normal. :)

But I want to be amazed - and don't think you can stop me. :P
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Postby gstark on Thu Aug 30, 2007 6:12 pm

ATJ wrote:
gstark wrote:
ATJ wrote:I was amazed how bright the moon was before and after the eclipse.


Don't be amazed; this is normal. :)

But I want to be amazed - and don't think you can stop me. :P


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Postby ATJ on Thu Aug 30, 2007 6:29 pm

gstark wrote:
ATJ wrote:
gstark wrote:
ATJ wrote:I was amazed how bright the moon was before and after the eclipse.


Don't be amazed; this is normal. :)

But I want to be amazed - and don't think you can stop me. :P


Ahhh ....


SPAEA.

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Postby Reschsmooth on Thu Aug 30, 2007 6:54 pm

gstark wrote:it's light source being the sun.


Imagine the size of the kit bag required to carry around that reflector!!!
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Postby Cre8tivepixels on Thu Aug 30, 2007 8:50 pm

phillipb wrote:My guess is the world renowned Adobe telescope. :wink: :lol:


LMAO.........in all seriousness i have NOT seen one shot like these anywhere else, with the stars so well exposed.......nice shots, even if they are 'enhanced' with pp...... :)

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Postby Oz_Beachside on Thu Aug 30, 2007 9:20 pm

very nice indeedy.

I would like to see one in between. The first is natural, the second belongs in a movie promo, love to see one halfway through the PP of the stars :D
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Postby Nnnnsic on Thu Aug 30, 2007 10:00 pm

I actually did use a tripod... I was on the balcony of one of my grandmother's place and even called her out when it had gone full eclipse.

And the lack of EXIF data is due to the "Save For Web" feature which I tend to use on images that I've put up on my blog... like these... :)
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Postby zafra52 on Sat Sep 01, 2007 12:02 pm

Both images are excellent and, like many members above, I haven't seen any image of the moon and the stars so clear. Appart from using a good tripod you must also have used a hell of good lens to get those images. Congratulations, you should feel very proud of your effort.
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Postby ozimax on Tue Sep 04, 2007 1:48 pm

Leigh, the 1st is outstanding, (second is great too), please let someone pick this for a future POTW. I've tried taking these moon shots and have never succeeded. BTW, was this taken with your prime lens?

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EDIT: Sorry, just read all the posts, 'twas taken with 80-400, I had initially thought it may have been with your prime attached to a telescope...it pays to read the fine print etc...
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