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EGRET in flight...

Postby big pix on Tue Jun 12, 2007 4:28 pm

Crept up on this one to send him into flight.......full frame image

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Postby Reschsmooth on Tue Jun 12, 2007 4:32 pm

Nice shot, my only quibbles are:

1. Seems a little dark.
2. Prefer to see part of the right hand side of the empty space cropped out for greater balance.

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Postby big pix on Tue Jun 12, 2007 5:00 pm

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Is this better..... just did a quick fix in NX....... I like space around my subjects, it gives the shot some depth, as does the now dark right hand side,
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Postby Pa on Tue Jun 12, 2007 5:22 pm

i like the redone image bp well done.


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Postby Bodak on Tue Jun 12, 2007 5:23 pm

Ditto on the rework..
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Postby NeoN on Tue Jun 12, 2007 5:44 pm

The second photo is much better as[Reschsmoth]suggested too much space on the right. IMHO it should always be more space in front of a subject, especially a moving subject , as in MOVING INTO...or in your case FLYING INTO...
It's a nice photo though :D
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Postby Oscar on Tue Jun 12, 2007 8:06 pm

Great capture Bernie.

Well done.

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Postby big pix on Wed Jun 13, 2007 12:19 am

thanks all........
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Postby Pehpsi on Wed Jun 13, 2007 2:59 am

Really great shot, and not an easy one to get either. Love his legs all stretched out :)
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Postby Oneputt on Wed Jun 13, 2007 8:56 am

Very nice Bernie. You are turning into a birder :wink: :D
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Postby big pix on Wed Jun 13, 2007 1:44 pm

Oneputt wrote:Very nice Bernie. You are turning into a birder :wink: :D


thanks John....... I was out shooting whales this morning, average shots but Eagles on the wing where the catch of the day........ will post some soon.....
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Postby ozimax on Thu Jun 14, 2007 1:54 pm

Bernie, you won't REGRET photographing the EGRET... :lol:
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