football chick C&C

some shots from saturday's shoot, looking for C&C. This is a two light setup, one for a graduated background, and the second a large softbox, frontal lighting.
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casnell wrote:Like #1 and#3, find the background transition distracting in the others.
Nice exposure/WB(and legs).
Chris
Geoff wrote:Who's idea was the stuff underneath her eyes??
Oz_Beachside wrote:Geoff wrote:Who's idea was the stuff underneath her eyes??
eye black (but we went with grey mackup rather than the real thing).
other than that, are they ok'ish?