My Latest Shoot

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My Latest Shoot

Postby Cre8tivepixels on Wed May 30, 2007 9:13 pm

Thanks for looking....

C & C welcomed....

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Loved working with the darker skintones....such beautiful skin!

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Postby PiroStitch on Thu May 31, 2007 12:11 am

Much better! The first is head and shoulders above the rest in this series!
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Postby Cre8tivepixels on Thu May 31, 2007 12:25 am

Thanks mate..phew i at least got 1 comment.......lol

This girl isn't a model (shes a singer) so it made it a little difficult.....she wasn't very comfortable at first, the back end of the shoot did better...!
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Postby jethro on Thu May 31, 2007 7:12 am

Great shots Dan! I really like the colour you get its seems nicely saturated
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Postby Cre8tivepixels on Thu May 31, 2007 10:13 am

Thanks Poon, i wouldn't use the phrase amazing either, but cheers......lol :)
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Postby wendellt on Thu May 31, 2007 1:42 pm

the tone is all good throughout
even lighting

but i like the last pose its fun
and that is really important

i still think the expressions in the first 2 are a little off she looks a little self conscious it's your job to make the model feel like million dollars if you can do that everything else comes easy
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Postby Alex on Thu May 31, 2007 3:00 pm

Impressive, Dan. I'd say No. 1 and 3 are the best lighting, tone and composition wise.

Well done!

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