this is the part.2 of my yesterday shots.
I have used a 35mm f1.4 AIS and the kit lense with my D70s.
I always appreciate your oppinion and your comments.
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A Trumpet man (part.2)
Hello,
this is the part.2 of my yesterday shots. I have used a 35mm f1.4 AIS and the kit lense with my D70s. I always appreciate your oppinion and your comments.
Of all of your images I think the last one is the best. It's great to see some creativity flowing....even if sometimes it doesn't quite work. I think a touch of flash fill on the last one...say at minus 1.7... would have lifted the image just a little and given it more snap. It would have opened the shadows around his eyes a little. Nice work! Thanks for posting.
Regards
Matt. K
love the colour and styling of the 3rd pic as well. The rim lighting from the sun is great
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The 2 B&W’s are standouts - a grubby scene deserves the B&W treatment - well done
Chris
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Some really nice and different images here.
#2 and #4 are the winners in this set, a man a trumpet and a ramshackle old house.. its a interesting concept and one that makes you ask questions. The other two are interesting since he's using the trumpet, not really as a trumpet, one like any olypmic torch and one like a telescope. This different use of the trumpet makes the shots a little unnatural, but I like being made uncomfortable by them. (if that makes sense)
I would pick the last one, and the second one after that. The B&W do it on these, but on number two, I find that he is looking away to much. I think it might look better with his head turned slightly more towards the camera.
Good creative thinking though!
Nice work Theodorus. I prefer the B&W shots too.
As Matt said a bit of flash fill on the last would have been good. I find the toilet bowls a bit distracting in the second shot and IMHO would prefer if they were cropped out. Good creative shots. Cheers, Mick
Big thanks for your kind words and big thanks for your suggestions.
These words can make me better! If you would like, i can post a 3rd part of this day. theodoros
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