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Portrait

Postby Jonesy on Sun Nov 26, 2006 12:52 pm

Got this one yesterday as we were stopped talking to some friends. Her little fella was a bit tired but I have a feeling she will love this when I give it to her.
I came up with this
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what do you think?

original is
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Postby Marvin on Sun Nov 26, 2006 6:54 pm

I like the treatment of the B&W except it makes the right side of his face (left of picture) a little too dark on my monitor. It doesn't seem dark on the original. I like the crop too.
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Postby seeto.centric on Mon Nov 27, 2006 11:15 pm

i agree, the b+w is really effective in this shot, works well with the bit of noise grain.. gives that classic look i guess is a way to put it.

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Postby PiroStitch on Mon Nov 27, 2006 11:18 pm

b&w is perfect.
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Postby jammy2 on Tue Nov 28, 2006 12:11 am

Nice capture of a personal moment, the colour shot works well but I also like the bw treatment giving it a timeless look =)
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Postby Oscar on Tue Nov 28, 2006 8:44 am

Jonesy, I love the shot. Good capture of the moment. IMHO the b&w treatment is terrific too.
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