Environmental Portrait

[Juztin]

Dear

Critiques welcome.,
this concept is "Environmental Portrait"

Thank you for your time.
Juztin

[Oscar]

Cool shots.
#1 There is something distracting in the background of the first shot - could be some large vent pipe. Would look much beeter if you cloned that out. I like the composition. Maybe brighten the subject a little.

#2 Don't know what it is - but there is something that really appeals to me about this shot. Leave this one as it is. Love it.

#3 Great concept but the subject appears needs to be a little brighter.

Well done. Cheers, Mick

[Mitchell]

I just love #2. The backlighting is wonderful, and the pose is very strong to match the architecture. Nice series.

[Yi-P]

I like the idea in #3, but you need some more light to fill up the model's face.

[PiroStitch]

Backlighting is awesome in the first and 3rd pics, though lack of light on the model's face really lets it down. Instead of lighting the entire model, I suggest a snooted flash directed at the model's face will be enough to really bring her out.

[Alex]

Juztin,

Good to see you posting again. I really like No. 2 and 3. No. 3 is a tad too dark though.

Alex

[ozczecho]

#2 is awesome...what a great pose by the model and great use of light by you...

[MattyO]

Definately a powerfull feeling about number 2, i really like that shot. Well done

[fishafotos]

2 is great but 1 and 3 both need the subject brightened.

[surenj]

Here is my two cents

#1 Take out the silver round thing in background
#2 Nice pose and backlight with overpowering flash.
#3 My favourite but wish the subject was brighter (or is it my monitor?) PS: Mitchell good to see you around. Hope life is good.

[surenj]

Ps: How did you the streaky light effect? Did you kick up dust?

[Biggzie]

Is that a bubble floating in #1?

#2 is my pick

#3 has great lighting, but I think the model probably is in the wrong spot for the lighting, hence she is too dark. I think a flash would spoil it. Maybe a reflector giving her a soft highlight might work and waring lighter coloured clothing so she stands out from the shelves.
That looks like a good location to play with ideas.

Thats my 2c worth

[Pa]

hi juztin 1 i like 2 is great 3 the model is just a bit to dark for me.
cheers pa