NSFW: One from a model shoot

Just wanted to get some C&C on this shot. Was shot in a basic home studio set up. Minimal pping - B&W conversion, shadow and highlight, some dodging and burning and sharpening.
Remote flash, Nikkor 50 f1.4.
Any suggestions for improvements are welcome.
Thanks
Alex
Remote flash, Nikkor 50 f1.4.
Any suggestions for improvements are welcome.

Thanks
Alex