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NSFW: One from a model shoot

PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 12:44 am
by Alex
Just wanted to get some C&C on this shot. Was shot in a basic home studio set up. Minimal pping - B&W conversion, shadow and highlight, some dodging and burning and sharpening.

Remote flash, Nikkor 50 f1.4.

Any suggestions for improvements are welcome.

Image


Thanks
Alex

PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 2:23 am
by elffinarts
the DOF with that lens is incredible at that range! Love the contrast and composition.

PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 10:44 am
by sirhc55
Alex - this photo works on so many levels. This is most certainly in the Man Ray style - love it.

PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 12:29 pm
by bonou2
Nice, although the shadow behind the "boob" is distracting.

Dan

PostPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 12:45 pm
by ATJ
How could I not like it. ;)

The tip of the nipple looks slightly out of focus, but other than that, a great shot.

PostPosted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 9:27 am
by Alex
Thanks for the comments and suggestions, everyone.

Cheers
Alex

PostPosted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 10:29 pm
by losfp
Errrr... Any chance we can get a NSFW tag for the subject???? :)

I quite often browse the image critiques section when I have a spare moment at work... and um.......

Intriguing image anyway! ;)

PostPosted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 10:42 pm
by Alex
losfp wrote:Errrr... Any chance we can get a NSFW tag for the subject???? :)

I quite often browse the image critiques section when I have a spare moment at work... and um.......

Intriguing image anyway! ;)


Appologies for this, losfp!

Cheers
Alex

PostPosted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 11:04 pm
by jethro
Great DOF and well its art say no more Well shot and well executed
jethro