My take on Dee from the workshop

I've started going through my shots from the portrait workshop.
I had a good time, the models were great, and incredibly patient. I've only done the ones of Dee so far and would appreciate C&C on these. I have a definate favourite, that being #3 because of the eye contact and light, but there is something I can't put my finger on about the other 3.
This is my favourite - I used a clamshell style setup here, just trying out the technique.
Cheers
I had a good time, the models were great, and incredibly patient. I've only done the ones of Dee so far and would appreciate C&C on these. I have a definate favourite, that being #3 because of the eye contact and light, but there is something I can't put my finger on about the other 3.


This is my favourite - I used a clamshell style setup here, just trying out the technique.


Cheers