Boat Harbour / Stockton Beach - My faves

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Boat Harbour / Stockton Beach - My faves

Postby losfp on Sun Jul 30, 2006 7:20 pm

Okay, I've pored over my pitiful collection of attempts from the weekend (I only brought home 219 shots, which is about 5 minutes of shooting for the bastards who had D2Hs), and I think I have settled on my 3 favourites. Coincidentally, they are all in portrait orientation. Does that say something about my style, and how I shoot best? I often find that I can frame shots a lot nicer (or to my satisfaction) in portrait.

Obviously that means I need to get a D2X, so I don't have to keep flipping the D70s on its side....

;)

Anyway. Here are my faves from the weekend. Suggestions and comments welcome! :)

Yep, rocks.
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A variation on the footsteps in the sand theme started by someone else (sheepie? Or hyunhie)
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I think this is my favourite. I was too lazy to go and look for another shot without tracks cutting across, though.
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Postby huynhie on Sun Jul 30, 2006 7:22 pm

Nice shot's there Des, the last being my favourite.
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Postby sheepie on Sun Jul 30, 2006 7:27 pm

Great DOF in the footprints one, although it scares me a bit - I need the footprints to be going away from me, not over me! :shock:

I have an almost identical shot of the rocks, so now won't bother posting that :x

And finally, you have to be happy with the third shot, especially given your laziness ;)

It's really cool looking at others' interpretations of locations such as this, which is part of why we have these get togethers. It's also about the social aspect, and learning off each other - something that this weekend succeeded with well and truly :)
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Postby losfp on Sun Jul 30, 2006 10:47 pm

sheepie wrote:Great DOF in the footprints one, although it scares me a bit - I need the footprints to be going away from me, not over me! :shock:


Funny enough, those footprints were made by someone sneaking up on me and pushing me in the back while I was balanced precariously on the balls of my feet, looking for a shot.

If it wasn't for my ninja-like reflexes and keen sense of balance, I would have ended up Tokina-first in the sand at the bottom of the dune.
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Postby ozimax on Sun Jul 30, 2006 11:23 pm

Really appreciate the last one, a classic "Lawrence of Arabia" photograph, with wonderful colour.
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Postby robster on Mon Jul 31, 2006 7:42 am

the downer with me on those footprints are they are shoeprints... sort of. not so natural or majestic. Nike? Reebok?

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Postby Slider on Mon Jul 31, 2006 7:50 am

Nice shots there especially the last. Dont mind teh first either but maybe a little less sky. Well done. :D
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Postby losfp on Mon Jul 31, 2006 10:41 am

robster wrote:the downer with me on those footprints are they are shoeprints... sort of. not so natural or majestic. Nike? Reebok?

:)


Hmmm.. I'm not sure, I'll check her shoes when I get home tonight ;)
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Postby PiroStitch on Mon Jul 31, 2006 10:45 am

i like the first and third pics the best. My only critique for the second pic is that the DOF is a tad shallow. Would prefer to see the first footprint tack sharp and a bit more.
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Postby byrt_001 on Mon Jul 31, 2006 11:36 am

hi

the last one is excellent! love the paterns on the sand.

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Postby avkomp on Mon Jul 31, 2006 11:49 am

last is my favourite also.

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Re: Boat Harbour / Stockton Beach - My faves

Postby daniel_r on Tue Aug 01, 2006 2:50 pm

losfp wrote:Okay, I've pored over my pitiful collection of attempts from the weekend (I only brought home 219 shots, which is about 5 minutes of shooting for the bastards who had D2Hs),


mmm, dunno who that was... :)

#3 gets a big thumbs up!
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Postby rooboy on Tue Aug 01, 2006 5:08 pm

I hate to be a parrot, but #3 is fantastic. Great work, would look fantastic printed large :)

#2 works because the DOF is just spot on - the whole footprint is sharp and nothing else.

#1 is the weakest for me, colour and texture are nice but there's no obvious focal point.

I think I'm with you on the portrait shooting Des. I guess the discomfort of holding the camera sideways makes us think about composition a bit more :)
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