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Janice reworked
Posted:
Thu Jul 27, 2006 3:44 amby PiroStitch
Have been fairly busy lately with work and organising a fairly huge step in my own life so haven't had the chance to do much photography.
Took some time out tonight and came up with this amongst other things.
Does it work, have I done too much? Any cc or ideas would be greatly appreciated.
Posted:
Thu Jul 27, 2006 4:18 amby wendellt
wayne very nice light falloff
the leading lines also contribute to the strength in this image
i would just loose the frame
Posted:
Thu Jul 27, 2006 9:11 amby PiroStitch
Thanks for the comments Wendell, you bloody night owl
Here's a version
w/out the border.
Posted:
Thu Jul 27, 2006 9:22 amby Greg B
That's a nice shot Wayne, well done. And I agree with Wendell (as do you!) the frame was no good.
Looking forward to seeing more along these lines.
Posted:
Thu Jul 27, 2006 9:48 amby greencardigan
I agree, it looks better without the frame.
An excellent image. Love the lighting.
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Thu Jul 27, 2006 10:00 amby Geoff
Very nice Wayne! Lighting is great and your PP work is also up there
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Thu Jul 27, 2006 10:57 amby sirhc55
Wayne - a beautiful shot that is well composed, has a story and nice colour. If I was to critique at all it would be to darken off the area (slightly) to the left of the pic, around the face
Posted:
Thu Jul 27, 2006 12:13 pmby PiroStitch
Thanks for the CC everyone.
Chris - taken onboard and I'll work on it tonight.
Cheers,
W
Posted:
Thu Jul 27, 2006 12:20 pmby avkomp
was just about to say: lose the border but as I scrolled down, I have been beaten to it.
I like the light falloff on this. works as an urban portrait.
good stuff
sTeve
Posted:
Sat Jul 29, 2006 11:31 pmby PiroStitch
Burned out the background a bit more as suggested by Chris. What do you think now
