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Life and Death

Postby pharmer on Sun Jun 25, 2006 1:01 am

Two shots of flowers growing in St Kilda cemetery

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Postby Sir Tristram on Sun Jun 25, 2006 7:33 am

Love # 1 Pharmer. Whats the trade secret to getting the forground flowers so vibrant and the background near b&w?

Great shots.
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Postby Just4AP on Sun Jun 25, 2006 11:17 am

Interesting effect on #1 Pharmer. Personnally it works for me although saturating the colours that much could have been a grave mistake :twisted:

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Postby bindiblue on Sun Jun 25, 2006 11:31 am

Awesome shots .. love them both

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Postby pharmer on Sun Jun 25, 2006 12:08 pm

Sir Tristram wrote:Love # 1 Pharmer. Whats the trade secret to getting the forground flowers so vibrant and the background near b&w?

Great shots.


Thanks.

Thats the colour the background was, a very grey afternoon with weak light.

The flowers in the front were lit by flash, which accounts for the vibrancy in comparison to the background.
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Postby Colcam on Sun Jun 25, 2006 12:21 pm

Very nice pair of images here, Barrie. The 1st one is a nice use of depth of field and great colour. Maybe the flash is a millionth too harsh? Not a problem though. Cloudy and stormy days can really sock that colour in due to the lack of sun reflection on the petals. I like the fresher approach of looking up under the flowers instead of the "Down the Throat" stereotype too.

No. 2 is VERY nice indeed. Light is just right. i like the dead petal as well to break the "niceness" and give a good focal point for the viewer. Nothing here I don't like.
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Postby suzanneg on Sun Jun 25, 2006 12:34 pm

Barry, lovely as usual. I particularly like the first one. The grey, dead cemetry, contrasted with the vibrant, life of the flowers. :D
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Postby pharmer on Sun Jun 25, 2006 7:05 pm

Cheers Col and Suzanne.

Shooting flowers at the cemetary makes a change from the regular and depressing gravestone shots (although, got plenty of those too)
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Postby Geoff on Sun Jun 25, 2006 7:15 pm

Beautiful Barrie - love #1 - insane! :)
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Postby Manta on Sun Jun 25, 2006 7:29 pm

Lovely shots Barrie.

I've always found cemeteries have some little pockets of hope and inspiration amongst the gloom and sadness. It makes an interesting juxtaposition, as you've acheived in the first shot. Great stuff.
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Postby PiroStitch on Sun Jun 25, 2006 7:43 pm

First one fits the title perfectly Barrie!

Don't think I'm quite game enough to start trawling through cemetaries :)
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Postby Geoff M on Mon Jun 26, 2006 10:20 pm

Great shots again Barrie. Love your style.
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