I decided to change the technique a bit this time for the first light pic. Set the shutter to 4" or 5", draw the shape and hold the camera still to capture the rest of the building.




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Old habits die hardBack to my old antics the other night when I was bored. 2 light pics and 2 alley pics.
I decided to change the technique a bit this time for the first light pic. Set the shutter to 4" or 5", draw the shape and hold the camera still to capture the rest of the building. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Hassy, Leica, Nikon, iPhone
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third is the best for me.
very urban grungy. well done. steve check out my image gallery @
http://photography.avkomp.com/gallery3
#3 is my favourite here too, but I like what you have done with #1 the combination of painting with light and then the recongnisable background features work well. #4 doesn't work for me and #2 could be improved by cropping closer.
Wayne #3 here too (but #1 is also very good). I'd be interesting in a monochrome treatment of that shot too.
Peter
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Thanks guys
![]() Hrmm starting to notice a pattern here...tends to be only the guys who like the urban images. No female takers? ![]() The coloured version of the third pic looked really nice when I had a chimp, but when I loaded it into RSE the WB made it look horrible hence the desaturation and tweaking of the WB. :S I'm a bit annoyed that the noise/grain (:P) didn't show up as much as I prefer seeing it. Will revisit the alley tomorrow night and go for a higher ISO. Incidentally, the shot was taken at ISO800 ![]() I've been trying to get the building to be shown a bit clearer, short of releasing a thermonuclear blast in the city or waving the camera around with a tripod attached ![]() Stubbsy, which pic did you want to see in monochrome? Hassy, Leica, Nikon, iPhone
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Wayne #3 monochrome & grainy film noir sort of feel.
Peter
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Wayne #3 for me too . In B&W and without the airconditioner unit and a corpse lying near the bins it could be a front cover for the old Malone (detective novels). Nice mood created
![]() cheers marco
Film noir is the perfect term for that photo - you can just imagine a gangster in a white suit carrying a Tommy gun walking along the alley ![]() Great shot, it's got a real atmosphere to it. Edit: Should have read Marco's post first - I'm just repeating him ![]() So join in the chorus, and sing it one and all!
I love the urban images, and I am really wanting to experiment myself, BUT, being female, I would want to drag my Husband with me...but what about the kids?? ![]() I will do something one day with 'grungy' urban stuff, it will just have to be day light stuff in a respectable suburb....I'm a chicken!! Great images Wayne, really like the third.
Jane, nothing to worry about
![]() ![]() ![]() Will post the re-works tonight. Might go and visit some of the other laneways tonight if I have time. Hassy, Leica, Nikon, iPhone
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