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Afternoon light

Postby Big V on Thu May 04, 2006 7:49 pm

On the way home I could not help notice this...

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Postby macka on Thu May 04, 2006 7:51 pm

Wow, colours are incredible! Much PP? Love the first one in particular; the contrast between the dark sky and the golden field is just fantastic.
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Postby Big V on Thu May 04, 2006 7:58 pm

Macka, nope just a touch on the levels..
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Postby avkomp on Thu May 04, 2006 8:01 pm

two great shots.

well done.

I also am interested in what was done PP wise to these shots, or is this just a case of how it was.

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Postby marcotrov on Thu May 04, 2006 8:07 pm

Brilliant colours Big V :)
#1 The contrast created between sky and field really is eyecatching. For me the colour of the sky is a little too dark and unrealistic, and I know that may have been the effect you were after (a little too oversaturated..hmm... can't make up my mind). The golden glow on the fields really make this shot though I would be tempted to clone out the lower left tractor wheel(?) as it is a little distracting.
#2 Colours still vibrant and more realistic though I would have been tempted to lighten the foreground fields and hills a little, they seem a tad too dark. I would also suggest a tighter crop on the bottom of the frame and make the bottom of the frame the yellow stubble and remove the nothingness of the green patchy field in the immediate foreground, I don't think it adds to the overall image. I'm also not sure if the middle ground isn't a little too cluttered.
I'd like to add that I'm being very picky here Big V commensurate with your ability as a photog. I still think the images are terrific but that probably wouldn't tell you too much on it's own :wink: Hope this makes sense :)
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Postby Big V on Thu May 04, 2006 8:09 pm

This is how the light was.. Truly spectacular. All I have done is nudged the levels slightly to compensate for the slight over exposure when metering..
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Postby jben_net on Thu May 04, 2006 8:36 pm

These images are right up there. I really like number 1. Excellent light.
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Postby losfp on Thu May 04, 2006 8:59 pm

Nice one! That's my favourite time for taking landscapes.. late arvo, when clouds are rolling in.
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Postby sheepie on Thu May 04, 2006 9:03 pm

Incredible light, and well captured :) #1 is the pick of the two, although I'm tempted to suggest a slightly tighter crop top and bottom, and a bit off the left, to avoid the foreground fence (?).

The second one I like, but it is not quite as effective. What I especially like about this style of shot is the way it shows the size of the clouds relative to common features on the ground (power poles, etc.).
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Postby Geoff on Thu May 04, 2006 9:12 pm

#1 is a winner!!! Well done BigV!!
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Postby huynhie on Thu May 04, 2006 9:14 pm

I like the first shot as well.
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Postby LOZ on Thu May 04, 2006 9:17 pm

Number one may be next weeks POTW good luck LOZ
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Postby Geoff on Thu May 04, 2006 9:20 pm

And it was taken with a canon!?! What's the world coming to? :) I keep coming back to this shot, the lighting, composition and (limited) PP is excellent. BigV out of curiosity, what lens did u use with for this shot?
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Postby rooboy on Thu May 04, 2006 9:54 pm

#1 is definitely a great capture. I love the tones in the sky in #2, but the classic simplicity in #1 keeps drawing me back.
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Postby Alex on Thu May 04, 2006 9:58 pm

No.1 is fantastic.

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Postby Big V on Thu May 04, 2006 10:05 pm

The lens was the 17-85 IS...
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Postby Alpha_7 on Thu May 04, 2006 10:11 pm

Love your work Big V, they are both great, but #1 just sings!

The light has been great this past week in the afternoon's really magical.
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Postby BBJ on Fri May 05, 2006 7:38 am

Nice shots Virgs, i thik if it was daylight here it would be like that here and is pissing down so i am hoping work will cancel. Yes these are good pics and looks good while the sun is shining,but for how long. Well done.
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Postby wmaburnett on Fri May 05, 2006 8:59 am

these are abosolutly wonderful! the contrast between ground and sky is great! Well Done
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Postby Steffen on Fri May 05, 2006 2:30 pm

The second one is great. The first one is spectacular. I've never seen a scene like that. Where did you get that huge black back-drop for the hill? :D

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Postby Frankenstein on Fri May 05, 2006 9:22 pm

Big V,
stunning.

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Postby Big V on Fri May 05, 2006 9:44 pm

Thank you all for the kind words and constructive advice. I am lucky that at this time of the year the area I live in has many dramatic stormy scenes. When the sun is setting and there are breaks in the cloud, the hills come alive and sometimes you get that deep dark sky in the east as a result!!
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