Portrait of grand daughter

I had the honour of doing the photography at my daughter's wedding recently.
It was my first wedding as a photographer, and my daughter's as well. Talk about pressure.
This is a portrait of my grand daughter, Maya, taken at the wedding.
Good old kit lens.

I think it works better in colour, but I'd appreciate comments please?
I've also toned down the red hue in the first image.
Other images featured in my gallery.
Cheers
John
It was my first wedding as a photographer, and my daughter's as well. Talk about pressure.
This is a portrait of my grand daughter, Maya, taken at the wedding.
Good old kit lens.



I think it works better in colour, but I'd appreciate comments please?
I've also toned down the red hue in the first image.
Other images featured in my gallery.
Cheers
John