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Some shots from the meet @ Melbourne Zoo

PostPosted: Sun Apr 23, 2006 9:32 pm
by DaveB
Thanks everyone, it was good to get out with some company for a change!

Zebras:
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In the Great Flight Aviary:
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(unfortunately a bit hot at the top of the feather :()

Giraffe armpit:
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"Old man of the forest"
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Critique welcomed...

Re: Some shots from the meet @ Melbourne Zoo

PostPosted: Sun Apr 23, 2006 10:06 pm
by daniel_r
DaveB wrote:
In the Great Flight Aviary:

(unfortunately a bit hot at the top of the feather :()


I don't think that it's too much of an issue here.

Have you considered a contrasty monochrome conversion for the image?

The was the first thing that came to mind, I've had quick go at it

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I don't normally edit other people's images, but I didn't know how best to describe it - lemme know and I'll take it down right away if you want.

PostPosted: Sun Apr 23, 2006 10:25 pm
by byrt_001
hi daveb

great shots... love n1, i think some photoshop work will be much better.

i agree with daniel_r a b/w version will be great i think his version is a bit much. sorry. i think the blacks are a bit too saturated.

thanks for sharing

christian

PostPosted: Sun Apr 23, 2006 10:48 pm
by nito
Zebra neck and feather shots are my pick.

PostPosted: Sun Apr 23, 2006 10:58 pm
by avkomp
another series of animal shots outside the frame.

good viewpoints here. deifinitely out of the ordinary.

Steve

PostPosted: Sun Apr 23, 2006 11:21 pm
by mic
You sure that is a Giraffe's Armpitt :lol:

PostPosted: Sun Apr 23, 2006 11:38 pm
by marcotrov
Dave some interesting takes on zoo animals. I like the last , the expression the which would have been enhanced had the ape been looking at the camera. I also like the design feature on the feather in amongst the rocks but like others I agree with Dave, a high contrast B&W really makes it stand out. I also think as a general piece of advice a few seem to lack a little pop and seem a little flat, perhaps some tweaking with the curves may help bring the images to life.
cheers
marco

PostPosted: Mon Apr 24, 2006 12:42 am
by ^catalyst
I was hanging out to see that feather one Dave, I saw it during a slight chimp session and knew it'd look good in the end.

I'll go ahead and say Dave is probably color calibrated? But I agree with the others, shots want a touch more OOMPH.

And Mark, if you are watching please post Dave's new avatar!

-Lachie

PostPosted: Mon Apr 24, 2006 9:36 am
by DaveB
Thanks for the refreshing comments folks!

^catalyst wrote:I'll go ahead and say Dave is probably color calibrated? But I agree with the others, shots want a touch more OOMPH.

Yes my environment is calibrated.
I will rework these images a bit: these first versions are almost untouched after output from DPP.

I forgot to mention, they were all taken with a 30D with 100-400mm IS lens.

mic wrote:You sure that is a Giraffe's Armpitt :lol:

Quite sure! The photo of his groin wasn't very pretty, but definitely distinct from this one. ;)

^catalyst wrote:And Mark, if you are watching please post Dave's new avatar!

Mark sent it to me last night.